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Ripe Muscadines

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                                     Ambrosial essence
                                 To the eyes nose palate...
                                 Deers jump six foot fence

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Iolanda Scripca

September 19, 2010 at 3:44 PM

These deer are very naughty :) I hope they don't get drunk with the special juices :) Thanks for your comment. Love, iolanda

Gert W. Knop

September 18, 2010 at 6:54 AM

Great Haiku a tribute to Muscadine grapes and wine, Sara! Can understand well this deer! Tank you for commenting Maple Leaves! Yes, Sara, we here in Germany have some different Maple species, the Syrup however comes from Canada and the US! Enjoy your weekend!...Gert

Monica Evette

September 15, 2010 at 12:15 PM

Like this one Sara. I'm from Alabama so I know what Muscadines are. There is actually a great wine made in Bama from Muscadines. You just made me think of home.

Diane Locksley

September 15, 2010 at 10:45 AM

The deer just couldn't resist! Very cool haiku with a great image, Sara. Diane

Katherine Stella

September 15, 2010 at 4:10 AM

tis the season for hunting too up in the northland I just could not take one down they are so beautiful great write here my friend also thanks so much for all your kind comments on my work I will be back around to give ya more I am just trying to get back on soup saddle lol keep up the great writing blessings to you and family