Robert L. Hinshaw Poet Limerick

Rip Van Winkle

After a long, long snooze Rip Van Winkle,

   Woke with a start, his duds all a-wrinkle!

      Said he, a bit dotty,

         "Quick!  Bring me a potty!

            I'm in need of a humongous tinkle!"

Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired
(c) 2015 All Rights Reserved

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Nette Onclaud March 14, 2015 at 11:23 AM I love your witty ways, Robert.. you just made my day; so funny!.. huggs

Lindsay Laurie March 13, 2015 at 10:16 PM G'day Robert... Ha ha Robert... and so began the tale of Noah's Ark with the big flood. Thank you Robert - Lindsay

Jan Allison March 13, 2015 at 6:52 PM ha ha ha great write Robert:-) Hugs jan xx 7 xx Robert L. Hinshaw March 14, 2015 at 10:49 AM Thank you Jan. Always great to hear from you - have a grand weekend - bob

Tim Smith March 13, 2015 at 5:25 PM lol...great one Bob...cheers Tim Robert L. Hinshaw March 13, 2015 at 6:56 PM Thx Tim - glad this one gave you some laffs - bob

Kim Merryman March 13, 2015 at 3:45 PM Ha, ha! Good one Bob! Love, Kim Robert L. Hinshaw March 13, 2015 at 6:55 PM Thanks Kim - glad it gave you a laff - bob