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RIP in the end earth will erase our footprint 12/29/2017 submitted to – Monoku 3: fire, earth, water and air – Poetry Contest

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Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 1/4/2018 10:47:00 PM

Wonderful Monoku, John - Happy New Year and congratulations on your win, my friend - well-deserved! :-)

Eve Roper

Date: 1/3/2018 12:39:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, John, great monoku. Hugs Eve ~`*

Susan Ashley

Date: 1/2/2018 1:13:00 PM

An intriguing and profound message John. Congratulations on your win.. ~Susan

Line Gauthier

Date: 1/2/2018 10:13:00 AM

Sizing up the grand scheme of things wonderfully, John. Congrats on your win.

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 1/1/2018 11:42:00 PM

Congratulations, John on your win.

Judith S

Date: 1/1/2018 5:34:00 PM

Congrats on your placement John! Such a strong message in so few words!!! Best, Judy

Rhoda Tripp

Date: 1/1/2018 5:06:00 PM

Congrats on this wonderful write and your placement in the contest.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/1/2018 3:41:00 PM

wow, love the impact of this one, John. GREAT write. Congrats for the win.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/1/2018 12:53:00 PM

- Congratulations on your great 2nd place in the contest, John :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Silent One

Date: 1/1/2018 12:24:00 PM

Great one liner John..Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Caycay Jennings

Date: 12/30/2017 9:48:00 AM

If we don't erase its first! Just being a contrary brat, I actually think this is very deep and well done, John. A thought provoker is what you wrote! May blessings be yours now and in the new year! Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Joanna Daniel

Date: 12/30/2017 5:00:00 AM

Excellent, John:)

Elizabeth Kinch

Date: 12/29/2017 10:31:00 PM

Brilliant monoku John.

Charlie Smith

Date: 12/29/2017 10:23:00 PM

Love it John. And it will too...

Akkina Downing

Date: 12/29/2017 8:19:00 PM

Very true!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/29/2017 6:42:00 PM

So true...like an etch a sketch