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Beach memories on Illustration Served

Do you remember Carl ?

My poem : "- Snow, No Thanks -"

https://www.behance.net/gallery/29507119/Beach-memories

 

 He has found his sweetheart                          animated-heart-image-0455

- Rio De Janeiro and Carl -

Carl is still in Rio
He is hooked on the casino
Sweet love in moonlight
Cherry musk all night
His libido is like a volcano













01.03.2018
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
6-8-5 -5 -10 syllables
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Sietesantos Avatar
March 7, 2018 at 2:35 PM
Tehehehe - what an enjoyable Limerick! You had me cracking up with your wit! The imagery is wonderful! Well done as always. Hugs and best wishes. Pandita
Andresen Avatar
March 8, 2018 at 3:07 AM
- Many thanks for visit, your smile and comment Pandita :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Williams Avatar
March 6, 2018 at 7:09 PM
Haha, Carl seems to be doing well it seems, good to see he found his love. Cherry Musk all the way.Great limerick Anne-Lise, thoroughly enjoyed....Maria xxx
Andresen Avatar
March 7, 2018 at 2:04 AM
- Many thanks for visit, smile and comment Maria :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Babcock Avatar
March 5, 2018 at 10:09 AM
Had me chuckling with this one.. glad he found his sweetie pie. lol Just getting over another flu been down for 10 days. love phyl
Andresen Avatar
March 5, 2018 at 12:01 PM
- Sad to hear ... hope you feel better, dear Phyllis - The flu is tough and long lasting this year - Many thanks for visiting and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Lovejoy-Burton Avatar
March 5, 2018 at 2:30 AM
Cute couple...must go read the first story. Lol
Andresen Avatar
March 5, 2018 at 2:36 AM
- Leanne, many thanks for visiting and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Bateman Avatar
March 4, 2018 at 12:53 PM
Hello Dear Anne-Lise, I see that Carl's situation has improved somewhat from the last time I read another poem you had written about him. "Rio" -- eh?? I'm glad he's found his sweetheart!! Enjoyed this one!! Best Always . . . Gary
Andresen Avatar
March 4, 2018 at 12:57 PM
- Carl do not waste the time in Rio ........ he lives 110% :))) - Many thanks for your visit and comment, Gary :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Michael Avatar
March 3, 2018 at 2:34 PM
I can't believe he's a hot eruption...Only goes to show that appearance can be deceiving...Maybe it's the Cherry musk...All the best Anne-Lise
Andresen Avatar
March 3, 2018 at 2:41 PM
- The cherry musk and his charm, Arturo :) - Thank you very much for your visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Robinson Jr. Avatar
March 2, 2018 at 3:33 PM
This poem is sooo Smiley good, Anne-Lise! Smoking hot poetry, dear. Mighty fine penning. Love and smile and laughter always.
Andresen Avatar
March 3, 2018 at 11:39 AM
- Many thanks for visit, smile and comment Freddie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gasun Avatar
March 2, 2018 at 3:13 PM
Awesome limerick my dear friend,Annelise. I like it. Thanks for sharing and the smiles:) Thanks also for dropping by. Have a great weekend and best wishes. Hugs back at you. love lots, Leonora
Andresen Avatar
March 2, 2018 at 3:15 PM
- A pleasure to see you, my friend Leonora :) - Thank you very much for your visit and comment :) - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)
May Avatar
March 2, 2018 at 2:36 PM
A fun write Anne...enjoyed...
Andresen Avatar
March 2, 2018 at 2:51 PM
- Thank you very much for your visit and comment, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Callus Avatar
March 2, 2018 at 11:43 AM
This made me smile, Anne-Lise:) Carl is quite a character, and I think it is now time to get to know his sweetheart even better! Hugs // paul
Andresen Avatar
March 2, 2018 at 11:47 AM
- I will discuss it with Carl :))) - Thank you very much for your visit and comment, Paul :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Raven Avatar
March 2, 2018 at 11:32 AM
Hi Anne-Lise, love the limerick. This form i just can't do. I have tried but iy just doesn't work. I have enjoyed reading so many Limericks these days and your Limerick is no exception. I love it and i got the giggles while reading. Now, this has been my laugh for the day. This one goes with the rest of my Limericks. This one goes into my faves. Have a wonderful weekend. Hugs....Mike. XX
Andresen Avatar
March 2, 2018 at 11:41 AM
- I'm not good with limerick .... think I spent four hours to write the first one: "As I was Walking in the Snow" ... :)))... this number two was a bit easier :))) - Many thanks for visiting and a fav ,, my friend Mike :) - hugs and lovely weekend // Anne-Lise :)
Rodrigues Avatar
March 2, 2018 at 6:07 AM
So much in your brief poem! Loveliness and fun relished with your words. Cherry musk!
Andresen Avatar
March 2, 2018 at 11:41 AM
- Thank you very much for your visit and comment, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Cunningham Avatar
March 1, 2018 at 4:59 PM
You've started something now Sunshine, you'll have to keep the story of Carl going .
Andresen Avatar
March 2, 2018 at 4:07 AM
- I'm not so good at writing limerick, Tom :) - ... and I have to have Carls permission ... that's his life :) - Many thanks for your visit - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Anish Avatar
March 1, 2018 at 4:32 PM
Like to go to Rio - have you ever been there? Been to a number of casinos - sometimes have come out ahead! Fun ode! PEACE & LOVE MATTHEW aNISH
Andresen Avatar
March 2, 2018 at 3:58 AM
- No, I've never been to Rio and never been to the casino Matthew :) - Many thanks for your visit - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Hagy Avatar
March 1, 2018 at 4:30 PM
This is so cute Sun :)... I don't remember Carl, but those cartoons are adorably hilarious and your limerick to match them is perfect! Have a a "sunny" day :)
Andresen Avatar
March 2, 2018 at 5:41 AM
- Thank you very much for your visit, Chris :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
One Avatar
March 1, 2018 at 11:23 AM
Haha... great haiku
Andresen Avatar
March 2, 2018 at 4:08 AM
- Many thanks for your visit, S.O. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
March 1, 2018 at 8:13 AM
Lol Anne like a great followup poem:-) hugs Jan xx
Andresen Avatar
March 2, 2018 at 4:08 AM
- Many thanks for your visit, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
O.J. Hunt Avatar
March 1, 2018 at 8:07 AM
Hilarious, you never fail to deliver sister, I always enjoy your wit and charm;-)
Andresen Avatar
March 2, 2018 at 5:40 AM
- Thank you very much for your visit, Keith :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Sands Avatar
March 1, 2018 at 7:59 AM
Funny Anne-Lise. Thanks for the laugh today :)
Andresen Avatar
March 2, 2018 at 5:40 AM
- Thank you very much for your visit, Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pandit Avatar
March 1, 2018 at 7:09 AM
A fun read, Anne-Lise.
Andresen Avatar
March 1, 2018 at 7:45 AM
- Thank you very much for your visit, Vijay - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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