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Rings of Love

Purity ring vows commitment marked with fidelity to the Saviour keeping soul sanctified around His redemption security. College ring triumphs midst gratitude acknowledging family support toward success' crest geared by the Lord's wisdom. Engagement ring glows while ecstatic in romance bliss awaiting altar date of Sovereign approval for love seal's authentication. Wedding ring sparkles as hope radiates set for blessed one-flesh venture as to God, bonded hearts pronounce "I do" surmounting challenges, till death would sever. Loyalty ring still prevails over every challenge steadfastly serving despite sufferings while the Creator assures verily His "well done"* approval nod.
*Mathew 25:21 His lord said unto him, Well done, thou good and faithful servant: thou hast been faithful over a few things, I will make thee ruler over many things: enter thou into the joy of thy lord. July 12, 2021 edited on July 21, 2021 1st place, "A BRIAN STRAND JULY 22" Free Verse Poetry Writing Contest Sponsored by Brian Strand; judged on 7/22/2021.

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Date: 7/23/2021 9:54:00 AM
So creative Beata focusing on the different kinds of rings and the ripples they create in our lives. Wonderfully done. Congratulations and blessings.
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Date: 7/13/2021 8:55:00 AM
Love’s seal - liked this term, this poem sparkles.
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Date: 7/13/2021 5:26:00 AM
Enjoyed!
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Date: 7/12/2021 2:03:00 PM
very nice, Beata!! Well done.
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Date: 7/12/2021 8:13:00 AM
I love haikus, and this is no exception; wonderfully penned with many significant meanings and feelings, I think it's more convenient to change the form to Senryu since Haiku is almost about nature
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Beata Agustin
Date: 7/12/2021 5:46:00 PM
Thanks for this uplifting comment. As to the form, I agree with you... yet, we are complying to "contest requirement" which calls for us to "use the form" for "eligibility pursuit." God bless you.
Date: 7/12/2021 5:02:00 AM
You amaze me by writing about God for every theme. Well penned! All the the best for contest
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