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Nippy brisk night draws a cloudless backdrop. Fireworks and gunfire shot into the air Whistling, exploding ka-boom, pop, pop, pop Lighting colorful spiral flowers, there. Fireworks and gunfire shot into the air Smell of sulfur and gunpowder wafts through; Lighting colorful spiral flowers, there. Sparkles scatter, freedom about it drew. Smell of sulfur and gunpowder wafts through; Whistling, exploding ka-boom, pop, pop, pop Sparkles scatter, freedom about it drew. Nippy brisk night draws a cloudless backdrop. 12/28/2020 Example for Rhyming Pantoum Contest 10 syllable count

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Date: 12/31/2020 10:55:00 AM
a lovely example Eve, will see if i can come up with a poem for you, Sending my best wishes for the new year:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 12/30/2020 5:17:00 PM
Love it, Eve!
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Date: 12/30/2020 1:25:00 AM
W-O-W!!! Thanks for this example. A very blessed New Year to you and your loved ones. God bless you.
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Date: 12/29/2020 5:41:00 PM
So creative, Eve, and I love the 'ka-boom, pop, pop, pop. ~ gw
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Date: 12/29/2020 8:41:00 AM
I tried to explain what I liked about it, Eve, but could not compartmentalize any sixty five things, so I faved it.
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Date: 12/29/2020 3:06:00 AM
A great example. Love it :) GOD B L E S S you
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Date: 12/29/2020 2:03:00 AM
Beautiful poem, Eve, can visualise the images:)
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Date: 12/28/2020 11:11:00 PM
You love pantoums. For me they are not easy as I find rhyming difficult. ~~
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Date: 12/28/2020 7:02:00 PM
Words aptly reflect the image!! A glorious approach to New Year's dawn!! Happy 2021 to you, Eve!!
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