Eve Roper Poet Pantoum

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Ringing In the New Year

Nippy brisk night draws a cloudless backdrop.
Fireworks and gunfire shot into the air
Whistling, exploding ka-boom, pop, pop, pop
Lighting colorful spiral flowers, there.

Fireworks and gunfire shot into the air
Smell of sulfur and gunpowder wafts through;
Lighting colorful spiral flowers, there.
Sparkles scatter, freedom about it drew.

Smell of sulfur and gunpowder wafts through;
Whistling, exploding ka-boom, pop, pop, pop
Sparkles scatter, freedom about it drew.
Nippy brisk night draws a cloudless backdrop.


12/28/2020

Example for Rhyming Pantoum 
Contest 10 syllable count

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Jan Allison December 31, 2020 at 10:55 AM a lovely example Eve, will see if i can come up with a poem for you, Sending my best wishes for the new year:-) hugs jan xx

Kim Rodrigues December 30, 2020 at 5:17 PM Love it, Eve!

Beata Agustin December 30, 2020 at 1:25 AM W-O-W!!! Thanks for this example. A very blessed New Year to you and your loved ones. God bless you.

Gershon Wolf December 29, 2020 at 5:41 PM So creative, Eve, and I love the 'ka-boom, pop, pop, pop. ~ gw

Caren Krutsinger December 29, 2020 at 8:41 AM I tried to explain what I liked about it, Eve, but could not compartmentalize any sixty five things, so I faved it.

Regina Mcintosh December 29, 2020 at 3:06 AM A great example. Love it :) GOD B L E S S you

Joanna Daniel December 29, 2020 at 2:03 AM Beautiful poem, Eve, can visualise the images:)

Victor Buhagiar December 28, 2020 at 11:11 PM You love pantoums. For me they are not easy as I find rhyming difficult. ~~

Newton Ranaweera December 28, 2020 at 7:02 PM Words aptly reflect the image!! A glorious approach to New Year's dawn!! Happy 2021 to you, Eve!!