Rightful Snow

Awesome beauty chilled, 
Definite effort forgives, 
Generating hourly igloos, 
Just kidding lovely maker, 
Nor'easter operating possible quiet rightful snow, 
Thoughtfully underneath, 
Very wonderful,
X-cited young zealot

Russell Sivey

Entrant into yasmin khan's "SNOW ABC" contest

3/10/2012
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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March 29, 2012 at 8:57 AM
congrats on your placement
Brown Avatar
March 29, 2012 at 5:35 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved placement Russell. Love, Carol
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
March 29, 2012 at 1:06 AM
Excellent Russell, a worthy winner xx
Johnson Avatar
March 28, 2012 at 2:27 PM
Congratulations on your win in this difficult contest. Love, Joyce
Burch Avatar
March 28, 2012 at 2:14 PM
Congratulations,Russell!!!! on your win...and very clever indeed!!! I love it!! :) Well Done... Big Huggsss,my friend,~deb
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 28, 2012 at 1:54 PM
Congratulations Russell on your wonderful win in this contest. These are not easy to do but you made it seem easy.
Sweetheart Avatar
March 28, 2012 at 1:45 PM
congrats Russell on a great big win for this excellent write in ABC on snow.. the first line is tremendous luv..
Horne Avatar
March 11, 2012 at 6:37 AM
Lovely write on snow, Russell. We rarely get snow here (in Plymouth, England), so it's wonderful for me to read snow poems
Sweetheart Avatar
March 10, 2012 at 8:03 PM
utterly grand write Russell and so well presented with this ABC form.. enjoyed the Nor'easter line.. good luck in the contest luv.. not an easy form to make sense but u surely achieved it .. wow..
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March 10, 2012 at 1:31 PM
Awesome, Russell! I liked the bit of humor and your ABC poem actually makes sense. So many of them don't. (LOVE your "X" word!) Winning wishes for Yasmin's fine contest. Love, Carolyn
Richards Avatar
March 10, 2012 at 9:15 AM
I would have been excited too!! (and I was so excited for the win in your last contest! Thank you so much Russell!! such an honor!)
Dietrich Avatar
March 10, 2012 at 8:59 AM
way to do this contest, Russell. ABC poems are quite difficult and I like how you pulled it off! Thanks for the contest win. Luv, andrea
Song Avatar
March 10, 2012 at 8:06 AM
Good morning, POET!! This is the most difficult form imaginable! You nailed the last part super swell with the clever spelling..X-citing, to say the least! lol. Great luck in Yas's 2nd contest! She loves to stress me out with hard assignments..I will tell her of this later....Thanks for considering my Candle Light poem for your contest..What an honor to even place..I had a special time researching the Last Supper so either way I looked at it, I won! Love, Gwendolen
Clark Avatar
March 10, 2012 at 4:53 AM
Wow this must have been hard to write. Great job. Good luck in the contest. Also thank you so much for my placement in your contest. I really apprecitated it.
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