Diana Freiwald Poet Free verse

Right There

Life, what an interesting life I've got...
 A whole universe inside my head. 
I smile, 
I laugh, 
I cry, 
and yes, 
sometimes,
all at the same time. 
What persistent mind I've got,
when I desire something,
the whole universe revolves around it,
for a few seconds... 
What an interesting smile I've got... 
What would someone find behind that smile, 
behind that tear,
behind that laugh,
underneath this drive that takes me to paradise?
There in that universe, 
right there, 
behind my eyes?

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Debbie Duncan October 3, 2013 at 10:40 AM fantastic write, I have these thoughts so many times.WELCOME TO POETRYSOUP. You will find a lot of nice people here ;}

Skat A September 18, 2013 at 1:48 PM Diana, , Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT

Poet Destroyer A September 16, 2013 at 11:23 AM Diana,, thank you for expressing your write and finding this site. -A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Poet Tacito September 16, 2013 at 10:56 AM I think what that person will find is what you want them to discover. :) Excellent piece, Diana!

Anne-Lise Andresen September 16, 2013 at 10:42 AM Welcome to P-Soup, Diana ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)