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If you were asked to, How would you describe the world? Would you start with the blooming flowers , That flood the lawns with colors Or the small forgotten herbs with curing as its powers? Would you start with the golden sunrise, Delivering hope at the wake of dawn. Or the ombre sunset sky, Wrapping up the day, so long? What about refreshing sand, That your feet sink into with ease, the salty ocean waves ‘nd like a lover how they tease, Would you start with how rain will always fascinate, blanketing the earth with love reviving, renewing up to date. Would you forget to tell about The taste of something sweet Or the feeling that you get When you see the color green? How will you describe What a waterfall feels like Or how an eagle spreads its wings For the most royal flight? Now, If you asked me, I would say The world is charged with passion With countless things to admire For all these splendid things Emerged, from a pyre.

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Date: 5/27/2020 5:10:00 AM
Good work on questions about describing Creation. I have done so in more Buddhist ways in my recent 2020 poems. I liked the rain and and taste stanzas most. As an Indian father from S. Africa, I think if Earth "Emerged, from a pyre" what do I do with HIRANYAGARBA? Dr. Deo
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