Right

I wasn't wrong, neither was I right! wished, never desired quaffed, never cried Worthless, made to believe painted mirrors, began to imitate preached, implied nothing. Shouted, in a silent voice words, just made noise Sentence, mere alphabets! Devoted and deviated Sufficed yet suffocated Wasn't myself still tried One day shall define, what's right!

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/27/2015 1:22:00 PM

- Hey Amrit Raj :) - Welcome with your first poem here on P- Soup - Hope your stay will give you much pleasure - I've been here since 11/26/2011 ....... it is a pleasure to share poems and read what others write - I wish you good luck :) - Nice to "meet" you :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/19/2015 6:39:00 PM

Amrit, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Amrit Raj Kapoor
Date: 9/20/2015 10:14:00 AM

Thank you for your warm welcome Linda. Will be surely looking forward to it.

Bo Lanier

Date: 9/18/2015 5:40:00 PM

i liked it! moves along quite well. well written.

Amrit Raj Kapoor
Date: 9/20/2015 10:14:00 AM

Thank you so much :)

Skat A

Date: 9/18/2015 4:25:00 PM

Hi Amrit, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Amrit Raj Kapoor
Date: 9/20/2015 10:16:00 AM

Thank you for your kind words and welcome Skat. Yes Surely!