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We move through the night, though the streets seem empty, we look left and right, electric vehicles are stealthy. As we exercise stepwise, sunrise happens. and black night fades its cover. Like phoresy, painted, pieces of heaven, the day opens with primary colors— reds that delight, oranges that tease and peacocking yellows that leaven. As the counterfeit rainbow enchants and rouses, streetlights waver and douse, lights flicker on in houses, and the earth blossoms active in borrowed hues. Morning twinkles with its particular, angular light, as we enter the still still lobby. They’ve already set out the coffee! With a sip, I feel the morning's started out right. . . Songs for this: Day Tripper by MonaLisa Twins Our Day Will Come by Amy Winehouse

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Date: 6/8/2025 10:53:00 AM
<3 . I could see it! And even taste the coffee! (Despite having to look up 'phoresy'!)
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Anais Vionet
Date: 6/8/2025 11:28:00 AM
That's one of those 'otherwise useless' chemistry words =]
Date: 6/8/2025 9:45:00 AM
Oh good. I mean if the Harvard kids weren't served cake and coffee to start their mornings it would just be so... tacky!
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Tom Woody
Date: 6/8/2025 1:28:00 PM
How did you know I had my neon green polyester jogging suit on today?
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Anais Vionet
Date: 6/8/2025 11:27:00 AM
That comment sir, has the rich, polyester feel of jealousy. =]

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