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Riding With Love

Vast and free,
Sweeping through
A calming sense fill the air
Subsides rising flesh from the chill
Warming the soul as it Thumps repeatedly
Sweeping slower then closer creeping into me
Showering Rains of Trust in it's most humblest state 
Non judgmental thou raw and sweet, Blind to physical aspects
Navigated by sincerity and pure emotion.....What And Adventure

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/5/2011 6:29:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Kibi. May your poetry bring inspiration to others as they read it. Love, Carol

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/15/2011 7:29:00 PM

A very descriptive writing. It's almost like riding a fast theme park ride with words.

John Rhinem

Date: 2/15/2011 11:45:00 AM

Smile ~ "The 'Beauty', Within Perfectly Made 'Love!!!'" ~ "Thank You Again, 'Precious Kibi,' For Stopping By My Dear" ~ "My Love & Warmth to 'You Always' &, All You Love," John!:) ~ Smile, "Have A Very 'Blessed & Beautiful' Day;'" Bye!:) ~

John Rhinem

Date: 2/15/2011 11:41:00 AM

Smile ~ Given the limited scope within visions knowing; many precious Souls find themselves somewhat often tied and bound amid the here and nows, chains of life and flesh and world but, as The Morning Star begins its ascent and an era begins to wane forevermore then, what was shall have been and what shall be will recite its notes, their notes, of everlasting happiness, joy and harmony; as reasons and purposes unto it All thus come to pass; the fulfilling of such overflowing cups ~ Cont:)

John Rhinem

Date: 2/15/2011 11:15:00 AM

Smile ~ Peacefully wonderful canvas brushed amid the colours of serenities love; very nice my dear ~ And Thank You for stopping by and leaving a thought or two amid reflectings pond although, I do not believe in fear be it within death or life for, I have Already beheld Zions everlasting glories yet, "Yes," ~ Cont:)

John Rhinem

Date: 2/14/2011 5:54:00 PM

S*M*I*L*E ~ "H*A*P*P*Y V*A*L*E*N*T*I*N*E*S D*A*Y M*Y D*E*A*R,,,B*E*A*U*T*I*F*U*L```K*I*B*I G*R*E*E*N¤¤¤'L*O*V*E,,,J*O*H*N!!!:))) ~

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/14/2011 5:44:00 AM

Terrific lines to your free verse Kibi and very poignant from your title to the content complimenting the title luv.. enjoyed and Happy Valentine's Day to u.. u have Soup Mail reply luv..