Riding With Love

Vast and free,
Sweeping through
A calming sense fill the air
Subsides rising flesh from the chill
Warming the soul as it Thumps repeatedly
Sweeping slower then closer creeping into me
Showering Rains of Trust in it's most humblest state 
Non judgmental thou raw and sweet, Blind to physical aspects
Navigated by sincerity and pure emotion.....What And Adventure
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
July 5, 2011 at 6:29 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Kibi. May your poetry bring inspiration to others as they read it. Love, Carol
Pettit Avatar
February 15, 2011 at 7:29 PM
A very descriptive writing. It's almost like riding a fast theme park ride with words.
Rhinem Avatar
February 15, 2011 at 11:45 AM
Smile ~ "The 'Beauty', Within Perfectly Made 'Love!!!'" ~ "Thank You Again, 'Precious Kibi,' For Stopping By My Dear" ~ "My Love & Warmth to 'You Always' &, All You Love," John!:) ~ Smile, "Have A Very 'Blessed & Beautiful' Day;'" Bye!:) ~
Rhinem Avatar
February 15, 2011 at 11:41 AM
Smile ~ Given the limited scope within visions knowing; many precious Souls find themselves somewhat often tied and bound amid the here and nows, chains of life and flesh and world but, as The Morning Star begins its ascent and an era begins to wane forevermore then, what was shall have been and what shall be will recite its notes, their notes, of everlasting happiness, joy and harmony; as reasons and purposes unto it All thus come to pass; the fulfilling of such overflowing cups ~ Cont:)
Rhinem Avatar
February 15, 2011 at 11:15 AM
Smile ~ Peacefully wonderful canvas brushed amid the colours of serenities love; very nice my dear ~ And Thank You for stopping by and leaving a thought or two amid reflectings pond although, I do not believe in fear be it within death or life for, I have Already beheld Zions everlasting glories yet, "Yes," ~ Cont:)
Rhinem Avatar
February 14, 2011 at 5:54 PM
S*M*I*L*E ~ "H*A*P*P*Y V*A*L*E*N*T*I*N*E*S D*A*Y M*Y D*E*A*R,,,B*E*A*U*T*I*F*U*L```K*I*B*I G*R*E*E*N¤¤¤'L*O*V*E,,,J*O*H*N!!!:))) ~
Sweetheart Avatar
February 14, 2011 at 5:44 AM
Terrific lines to your free verse Kibi and very poignant from your title to the content complimenting the title luv.. enjoyed and Happy Valentine's Day to u.. u have Soup Mail reply luv..
Dietrich Avatar
February 13, 2011 at 9:23 PM
Just like riding a wave. REally nice, Kibi.
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