Riding the Train

RIDING THE TRAIN

Catchin' the train to the city makes an interesting day
Peak hours all the workers going to earn their pay
Many nationalities all different in their own way
And then there's the trains always a delay

I silently watch as I sit alone
Many of them busy on their phones
One calls for a ride they're nearly home
Another rejects a call number unknown

An elderly couple sit near the doors
Shopping trundle in hand, out to the stores
One another they obviously adore
Weekly shopping to them is no chore

A young man with headphones sits down below
Tapping his feet to the radio
Looks like a student with a portfolio
Maybe Art he looks like Michelangelo

A middle aged woman above takes a seat
Dressed impeccably she's extremely neat
As she sits you can see her physique
Very fit but oh so petite

A group of young students are making a noise
Some other passengers it really annoys
One of them says 'Can you be quiet please Boys'
But they just get worse and increase their voice

A mum with a pram and a child in tow
Pointing through the doors at the arched rainbow
The child sits on a seat looking out the window
Mum's in a hurry but the trains' on a go slow

The end of the day and I'm heading home
A busker at the station plays his xylophone
The station manager speaks into a speaker phone
It's amazing the walks of life a train ride has shown!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 8/25/2017 10:53:00 AM
Wonderful! I believe this is your most viewed and liked poem so far and I can see why. Once again you're very descriptive and photogenic in your writing. Keep typing keep writing never lay your pen down except that you be found writing the poem (a general fav this one) Write on! James :D
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Date: 2/5/2016 5:36:00 AM
Beautiful observation collected into a nice poetry.
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Date: 2/4/2016 11:33:00 PM
well done, Susan.... SKAT
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