Riding For Love

on our way~to our ranch in town, galloping horses, sun burnt brown, a trail of dust greets evening sky, our hearts are young but love still shy, on our way to meet girls to date, shall find me one if luck be fate, what to say as opening line? “I love you so, will you be mine?” or should I ask her for a dance, may be she will pick with a glance, should I act macho and aloof, blow cigar smoke rings at the roof? nervous slowly we walked in, sat on a bar stool ordered gin, as we eased in to ambience, we looked around for dating chance, bevy of girls sat across us, If winked at, will they make a fuss? soon the music got us on feet, were moving to rap of drum beat, laughter, singing echoed around, kicking feet we made tapping sound, soon shyness lost love took over, I kissed her under bell tower! thirty years since the day we met, treasured moments hard to forget!
4th placement Written 20/01/2021 Line Gauthier sponsor Cowboy poetry contest! 26 lines rhyme aabbccdd.... 8 syllables each
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Hinshaw Avatar
February 4, 2021 at 10:40 AM
Hearty congrats, Krish, for your well-deserved win for this very entertaining verse! I love great cowboy poetry and this is a GREAT one! Many thanks for your kind comment re my win and best to you as you continue your poetical journey - Bob
Radhakrishna Avatar
February 4, 2021 at 6:01 PM
Thank you Rob! That is a great compliment and pleased it was ranked amongst some superb writes as yours. Honoured!
Y. Avatar
February 4, 2021 at 7:43 AM
Hi Krish, What a romantic “ cowboy” write. Well done. Congratulations on your win. Have a great day:-) Alexis
Radhakrishna Avatar
February 4, 2021 at 8:33 AM
Thanks Alexis!! Couldn’t manage the Cowboy language!
Fowler Avatar
February 4, 2021 at 6:27 AM
Sweet love Krish. Congratulations on the win! Linda
Radhakrishna Avatar
February 4, 2021 at 6:30 AM
Thanks Linda! Pleased it was liked!
Wolf Avatar
January 25, 2021 at 5:32 PM
You are one cavalier cowboy, I must say, Krish! And I'm not 'blowing smoke rings either!' Here's to a winner in the contest. ~ Gershon
Radhakrishna Avatar
January 27, 2021 at 5:01 AM
Thanks Gershon! Thanks for your positive prediction. Let’s see!!:):)
Mcintosh Avatar
January 21, 2021 at 5:38 AM
Lovely... Best in the contest. God bless you
Radhakrishna Avatar
January 21, 2021 at 6:07 AM
Thanks Regina! My best wishes to you! Kind regards
Michael Avatar
January 20, 2021 at 5:22 PM
Nice flow here...Enjoyed it.
Radhakrishna Avatar
January 20, 2021 at 8:44 PM
Thanks Arturo! Pleased you like it! much obliged for the visit!:)
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