Audrey Haick Poet Narrative

Ridiculously Sensible

I was not impressed by his super mediocre talent

     The kind one should keep under wraps exposed

          To a world of less well known and near do well designers 

               Who struggle easily with mundane exotic tasks which, when left

                    In the hands of expert amateurs would not seem so

                          Ridiculously sensible at a time such as now

                                                            ~*~

Note:  For Kristen Bruni's  "Oxymoronica" Contest

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Vince Suzadail Jr. February 16, 2013 at 9:17 AM I always thought OXY MORONS were politicians carrying a bottle of bleach.

Lisa Cole January 26, 2011 at 8:38 AM you are so talented, thanks for sharing x

Kevin Semeniuk January 23, 2011 at 8:22 PM Great write as usual! I love the twists you have here with all your word play!

Kris Walters January 23, 2011 at 5:40 PM This is really clever! Wisely done :) I've known many "expert amateurs"! Hugs, Kris~

Carrie Richards January 23, 2011 at 8:46 AM Wow....you fulfilled this Oxy so cleverly....that we almost have to read it twice to catch the contradictions!! Well done!! love, Carrie

Linda-Marie Sweetheart January 23, 2011 at 7:29 AM Annalise this is great.. u did a fantastic job with the oxymoronic lines... and good luck in the contest.. luv the first one... and your title.. like my "True Myth"...super ... enjoy a blessed day luv..

Carolyn Devonshire January 23, 2011 at 6:02 AM Not only does your poem have all the necessary ingredients for great oxymorons, but it also makes a point. Great job with this contest entry, dear friend. Hope to see your poem in the winners' circle. Love, Carolyn

Joy Wellington January 23, 2011 at 2:14 AM Best of luck with your greatness exposed here in this write. Love, Joy (Jew)

Constance La France January 22, 2011 at 9:23 PM Lots of wonderful oxy in this poem, best of luck in the contest~~