Ride On a Restless Breeze

I took a ride on a restless breeze; she told me of her travels wide; she took me on a flight of soft and silky, winds; a delight. She, a magic carpet, told me terrific tales, some the darkest, so old and timeless they be; that it took the entire night, our universe to see. Yes, above the stratosphere, I rode upon her without fear; the planets to me she introduced; for the occasion, they dressed in suits. They were such formals to behold; worn by planets very old; a party ensued in space’s frosty void; some warmth, Venus deployed. I still think about my planet friends, along with those gifting winds. Perhaps another time I’ll receive, another invite, just for me.
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Krutsinger Avatar
January 28, 2019 at 11:04 PM
Ah, M.L. I so wish I could see those formal planets dressed up in suits! Love this one; the whimsy pleased me in every way!
Kiser Avatar
January 30, 2019 at 4:34 AM
Good, I am glad and thanks again.
Faulkner Avatar
January 28, 2019 at 1:18 PM
Sounds so mystical and magical - where can I get a ticket:)
Kiser Avatar
January 30, 2019 at 4:34 AM
You don't; just grab it's tail and jump on for the ride. Hold on tight! Thanks.
Trifiatis Avatar
January 28, 2019 at 5:27 AM
Mesmerizing experience , mesmerizing personification dearest M.L.K!
Horsman Avatar
January 26, 2019 at 4:02 PM
A wonderful journey of a life time, love this poem,
Kiser Avatar
January 30, 2019 at 4:35 AM
I'm glad Harry, thanks so much.
Godwin Avatar
January 26, 2019 at 1:28 PM
Your imagination galaxy soared and I loved the feel of it as shared by your pen. I got a bit cold but barely cared so enthralled was I with ALL. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Kiser Avatar
January 30, 2019 at 4:35 AM
"imagination galaxy"; I love that! Thanks so much.
Sands Avatar
January 26, 2019 at 11:12 AM
Very nice :)
Kiser Avatar
January 30, 2019 at 4:35 AM
Thank you.
Onclaud Avatar
January 26, 2019 at 10:39 AM
refreshing tale filled with wonder ML..huggs
Kiser Avatar
January 30, 2019 at 4:36 AM
I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks
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