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Ride On A Restless Breeze

I took a ride on a restless breeze; she told me of her travels wide; she took me on a flight of soft and silky, winds; a delight. She, a magic carpet, told me terrific tales, some the darkest, so old and timeless they be; that it took the entire night, our universe to see. Yes, above the stratosphere, I rode upon her without fear; the planets to me she introduced; for the occasion, they dressed in suits. They were such formals to behold; worn by planets very old; a party ensued in space’s frosty void; some warmth, Venus deployed. I still think about my planet friends, along with those gifting winds. Perhaps another time I’ll receive, another invite, just for me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 1/28/2019 11:04:00 PM
Ah, M.L. I so wish I could see those formal planets dressed up in suits! Love this one; the whimsy pleased me in every way!
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 1/30/2019 4:34:00 AM
Good, I am glad and thanks again.
Date: 1/28/2019 1:18:00 PM
Sounds so mystical and magical - where can I get a ticket:)
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 1/30/2019 4:34:00 AM
You don't; just grab it's tail and jump on for the ride. Hold on tight! Thanks.
Date: 1/28/2019 5:27:00 AM
Mesmerizing experience , mesmerizing personification dearest M.L.K!
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Date: 1/26/2019 4:02:00 PM
A wonderful journey of a life time, love this poem,
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 1/30/2019 4:35:00 AM
I'm glad Harry, thanks so much.
Date: 1/26/2019 1:28:00 PM
Your imagination galaxy soared and I loved the feel of it as shared by your pen. I got a bit cold but barely cared so enthralled was I with ALL. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 1/30/2019 4:35:00 AM
"imagination galaxy"; I love that! Thanks so much.
Date: 1/26/2019 11:12:00 AM
Very nice :)
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 1/30/2019 4:35:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 1/26/2019 10:39:00 AM
refreshing tale filled with wonder ML..huggs
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 1/30/2019 4:36:00 AM
I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks