Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Poet Abecedarian

Ride of a Lifetime

RIDE OF A
LIFETIME

A roller-coaster catches my eye in flash 
B eguiling me to run bullet fast...
C hequered spiking thrill press my spine
D ancing stars shoot then surround me fine
E levating energy screaming release
F ever fervor crawling --
G leaming a 
H appy-go-lucky mood!
I nhaling deep through 
J uggling groove of the rollercoaster.
K indles me for more, more and more! yet,
L iquifying my knees and nerves.. I..
M ounting to swerves and curves
N uts and shells will break
O n rain of screams and shouts.
P opping heartbeats!
Q uickening speed 
R ough ground is up!
S kies smiling down!
T wists and turns making me froze
U nlimited are my thunder screams!
V eins beneath engorged,
W ith shoes to drop-out too!
X  eransis throat 
Y elling for water soothe!
z ealing roller-coaster ride...

© O. E. Guillermo
10:22pm, August 21, 2014
Sponsor	Shadow Hamilton
Contest Name	Abecedarian
Placed 3rd...

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Poet Destroyer A September 9, 2014 at 2:26 PM Olive, this is a nice example of an abecedarian poem. Amazingly done. Love Linda

Shadow Hamilton September 8, 2014 at 2:02 PM I love this fun write Olive I felt you lose the flow slightly on your G line which cost you some points most enjoyable write congrats on 3rd place and ty for your support Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 9, 2014 at 12:22 AM you are right Shadow.. :) my letter G, somewhat stopped the flow.. :) anyhow thanks much for the placement.. i am challenged with your contest. :)

Regina Mcintosh September 8, 2014 at 7:08 AM Congratulations!!! Love and prayers, Gina Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 9, 2014 at 8:37 AM Thanks much..:)

Dr.Ram Mehta September 8, 2014 at 5:15 AM Cleverly done piece, Congrats. Olive Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 9, 2014 at 8:36 AM Thanks much..dr. Ram

Paul Callus September 7, 2014 at 5:05 PM This has been an enjoyable ride, Olive_eloi! You describe it so very well with the thrills and excitement included. Congrats on a fine win!! .. paul Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 8, 2014 at 4:15 AM Thanks much Paul..:) appreciate it..:) GBU

Brenda Meier-Hans September 7, 2014 at 2:42 PM Well done Abecedarian poem Olive Congratulations. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 8, 2014 at 4:14 AM Thanks much Brenda..:)

Nette Onclaud September 7, 2014 at 2:16 PM yeahhh.. riding high on the winners' list, eloi.. keep it up.. congrats, kapatid!.. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 8, 2014 at 4:12 AM Thanks much Nette..:) kapatid too..:) weeee hugs hope to see you soon again..:) Nette Onclaud September 7, 2014 at 2:16 PM di ako nakasali... yayy

Jan Allison September 7, 2014 at 2:08 PM Dropping back with my congratulations Olive:-) Hugs Jan xxx Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 8, 2014 at 4:13 AM Thanks much Jan..:) I appreciate it,, hugs hugs

Robert Skinner September 5, 2014 at 8:31 AM Hi Olive. Thanks for your comment on my "Waiting..." Poem. I appreciate it very much. I like the alphabet poem & many of your other poems, but I'll comment on this one....I'll never look at the alphabet the same way ever again...very well written....I might have to try one myself. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 5, 2014 at 10:20 AM Thanks much RObert.. I appreciate your support.. :) God bless you always.. :)

Sara Kendrick August 31, 2014 at 6:19 AM Way to go ...Very creative ..Reads like a winner to me..These are not so easy to write and you didn't miss a beat..Sara Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser August 31, 2014 at 8:30 AM Thanks much Sara..:) I appreciate your support..:) GBU

Arthur Vaso August 22, 2014 at 11:30 PM And here I was sure this one was going to be about me!!!!! OK NOT, but still a lovely poem!!!! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser August 31, 2014 at 8:29 AM Thanks buddy Art..:) GBU

Maurice Yvonne August 22, 2014 at 10:57 PM wow you can write. excellent. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser August 31, 2014 at 8:28 AM Not much Maurice.. I just tried..:) thanks GBU

Tim Smith August 21, 2014 at 6:21 PM Now that is a ride worth riding again...hugs Tim Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser August 22, 2014 at 4:23 AM Hey take me with you..:D lol thanks Tim..:) hugs

Jerry T Curtis August 21, 2014 at 6:08 PM Perfect, Olive Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser August 22, 2014 at 4:24 AM Thanks for the comment Jerry..:)

Eileen Manassian August 21, 2014 at 11:27 AM Great job, sweetie. It was a thrilling ride. Love how you took us along with ya! I'm scared of roller coaster. Been on a few...but it can be fun. Hugs Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser August 22, 2014 at 4:24 AM Yes it can be Eileen..:) thanks for the comment..:) I appreciate not..:)

Barbara Gorelick August 21, 2014 at 11:24 AM Wow, what a ride..am going to have to look up "xeransis"..Nice work..I find this form so hard..BG Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser August 22, 2014 at 4:22 AM Hence I follow up. Line to support it..:) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser August 22, 2014 at 4:21 AM Hard really to put a word under x and z I hope what I have chosen are ok.. Xeransis is a term meaning drying up..:)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma August 21, 2014 at 10:51 AM Excellent Olive! Has a thrill that cud kill ! Gl in contest! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser August 22, 2014 at 4:17 AM Thanks you..:) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser August 22, 2014 at 4:16 AM yes it could kill..:) hence I entitled it a ride of a lifetime..:)

Jan Allison August 21, 2014 at 9:39 AM thrilling abecedarian good luck for the contest:-) hugs Jan xxx Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser August 21, 2014 at 5:16 PM Thanks much Jan.. :D hugs and hugs.. :D