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Ride of a Lifetime

RIDE OF A LIFETIME A roller-coaster catches my eye in flash B eguiling me to run bullet fast... C hequered spiking thrill press my spine D ancing stars shoot then surround me fine E levating energy screaming release F ever fervor crawling -- G leaming a H appy-go-lucky mood! I nhaling deep through J uggling groove of the rollercoaster. K indles me for more, more and more! yet, L iquifying my knees and nerves.. I.. M ounting to swerves and curves N uts and shells will break O n rain of screams and shouts. P opping heartbeats! Q uickening speed R ough ground is up! S kies smiling down! T wists and turns making me froze U nlimited are my thunder screams! V eins beneath engorged, W ith shoes to drop-out too! X eransis throat Y elling for water soothe! z ealing roller-coaster ride... © O. E. Guillermo 10:22pm, August 21, 2014 Sponsor Shadow Hamilton Contest Name Abecedarian Placed 3rd...

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/9/2014 2:26:00 PM

Olive, this is a nice example of an abecedarian poem. Amazingly done. Love Linda

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 9/8/2014 2:02:00 PM

I love this fun write Olive I felt you lose the flow slightly on your G line which cost you some points most enjoyable write congrats on 3rd place and ty for your support

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/9/2014 12:22:00 AM

you are right Shadow.. :) my letter G, somewhat stopped the flow.. :) anyhow thanks much for the placement.. i am challenged with your contest. :)

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 9/8/2014 7:08:00 AM

Congratulations!!! Love and prayers, Gina

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/9/2014 8:37:00 AM

Thanks much..:)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/8/2014 5:15:00 AM

Cleverly done piece, Congrats. Olive

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/9/2014 8:36:00 AM

Thanks much..dr. Ram

Paul Callus

Date: 9/7/2014 5:05:00 PM

This has been an enjoyable ride, Olive_eloi! You describe it so very well with the thrills and excitement included. Congrats on a fine win!! .. paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/8/2014 4:15:00 AM

Thanks much Paul..:) appreciate it..:) GBU

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 9/7/2014 2:42:00 PM

Well done Abecedarian poem Olive Congratulations.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/8/2014 4:14:00 AM

Thanks much Brenda..:)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/7/2014 2:16:00 PM

yeahhh.. riding high on the winners' list, eloi.. keep it up.. congrats, kapatid!..

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/8/2014 4:12:00 AM

Thanks much Nette..:) kapatid too..:) weeee hugs hope to see you soon again..:)

Nette Onclaud
Date: 9/7/2014 2:16:00 PM

di ako nakasali... yayy

Jan Allison

Date: 9/7/2014 2:08:00 PM

Dropping back with my congratulations Olive:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/8/2014 4:13:00 AM

Thanks much Jan..:) I appreciate it,, hugs hugs

Robert Skinner

Date: 9/5/2014 8:31:00 AM

Hi Olive. Thanks for your comment on my "Waiting..." Poem. I appreciate it very much. I like the alphabet poem & many of your other poems, but I'll comment on this one....I'll never look at the alphabet the same way ever again...very well written....I might have to try one myself.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/5/2014 10:20:00 AM

Thanks much RObert.. I appreciate your support.. :) God bless you always.. :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/31/2014 6:19:00 AM

Way to go ...Very creative ..Reads like a winner to me..These are not so easy to write and you didn't miss a beat..Sara

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 8/31/2014 8:30:00 AM

Thanks much Sara..:) I appreciate your support..:) GBU

Arthur Vaso

Date: 8/22/2014 11:30:00 PM

And here I was sure this one was going to be about me!!!!! OK NOT, but still a lovely poem!!!!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 8/31/2014 8:29:00 AM

Thanks buddy Art..:) GBU

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 8/22/2014 10:57:00 PM

wow you can write. excellent.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 8/31/2014 8:28:00 AM

Not much Maurice.. I just tried..:) thanks GBU

Tim Smith

Date: 8/21/2014 6:21:00 PM

Now that is a ride worth riding again...hugs Tim

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 8/22/2014 4:23:00 AM

Hey take me with you..:D lol thanks Tim..:) hugs

Jerry T Curtis

Date: 8/21/2014 6:08:00 PM

Perfect, Olive

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 8/22/2014 4:24:00 AM

Thanks for the comment Jerry..:)

Eileen Manassian

Date: 8/21/2014 11:27:00 AM

Great job, sweetie. It was a thrilling ride. Love how you took us along with ya! I'm scared of roller coaster. Been on a few...but it can be fun. Hugs

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 8/22/2014 4:24:00 AM

Yes it can be Eileen..:) thanks for the comment..:) I appreciate not..:)

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 8/21/2014 11:24:00 AM

Wow, what a ride..am going to have to look up "xeransis"..Nice work..I find this form so hard..BG

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 8/22/2014 4:22:00 AM

Hence I follow up. Line to support it..:)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 8/22/2014 4:21:00 AM

Hard really to put a word under x and z I hope what I have chosen are ok.. Xeransis is a term meaning drying up..:)