Riddle-Fiddle-Diddle

-A    NOTE-             
***DO NOT ATTEMPT TO*** 
***FIGURE THIS OUT*******
***JUST SAY HELLO : - )****
 ***or  WHAT is this??? ***

((RIDDLES-FIDDLES-DIDDLES ))

My towel is constructed of silk
That did not make sense at all
I drink bitter sour milk
Once again no sense at all

A busted line  -  A stronghold
Confusing as we speak?
A thief breaks and left gold instead 
Leaving my world incomplete ???

In my dream he cut my head
puzzled ???
My dreams in a flowerbed
I'm still puzzled ???

White winter shelter when it comes to snow
a riddle, a riddle of black snow
Black as the night covered by coal
Wonder if I said good night?

I walk and I have no feet
I speak and I have no mouth
Why is it impossible? 

a breathing exercise,
misunderstood 
the stick walking is bent

My boat is flipped upside right of everything 
The grave is empty with dirt and debris 
I've lost my mind completely 

((Last but not least))

The  grandmother is tall
The mother came short
The father is darker than most 
Some white child of sort
Why the Mexican???


BY: P.D.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 6/4/2016 6:19:00 PM
Wow, I haven't even started drinking yet and i am all tripped out reading this! Very cleverly confusing and fun to read. but as per direction... I'm here saying HI :) sending you smiles sweet lady x
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Date: 6/2/2016 12:17:00 PM
Congratulations on having this poem featured here this week, Linda! Though against your wish, I have attempted to make some sense out of these 'flashes' of poetry, and I can assure you that I did not fail! Shows that life is not wholly made up of what we normally expect...surprises are waiting in the shadows. hugs // paul
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Date: 6/2/2016 10:46:00 AM
Oh, this is maddening! And I do these sort of poems myself. I just write the first thing comes into my head. Everything makes sense in a strange way. You are strange. I love you. daver
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Date: 6/1/2016 10:06:00 PM
"I have no mouth and I must scream." - Harlan Ellison
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Date: 5/31/2016 10:08:00 AM
Great that this a featured poem this week - too cute! - Jesse
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Date: 7/24/2014 3:22:00 AM
Well as unusual as this may seem, it makes perfect sense to me, Linda. Musings of the wandering mind is an exercise that I use from time to time in order to see if something profound may occur. Looks as if you may have stumbled on a few, my dear. Have a beautiful day.... Robert.
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Date: 3/16/2014 10:13:00 PM
PD Did you take crazy pills before writing this. LOL Or were a bad girl and doing some drunk poem writing. HEE HEE Thanks for the wonderful comment on my Hateful Hearts poem. Hugs
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Date: 5/8/2013 8:28:00 PM
All quite understandable to a like mind I would guess, probably one in some sort of asylum lol. So your keeping him dangling on a string are yer, that man of yours. Methinks you like toying with men lol. Take care my Sweet Dark Friend, Richard
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Date: 8/13/2012 2:28:00 PM
Hey you must be the ( Tex Mex ) I've heard so much about.." for a while there I thought there were more than one of e'm.. now I see theres a whole one of a lot)) "now thats really hot!!!
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Date: 10/31/2011 11:37:00 PM
Here is an oldie i already saw too. I just can' t find an oldie I have not seen! Anyway, did you know at the top of this one you had put: just stop and say hi, don't even try to figure this one out. So I am saying HI!!! and nice to see you, Irma.
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Date: 8/2/2010 8:54:00 AM
Well if you're not from Mexico, then you're obviously not a Mexican! See, I do read your work!
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Date: 6/20/2010 1:03:00 AM
confusing with smile on face.nice work.
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Date: 6/13/2010 11:10:00 AM
WHo IS JoHN R. WHAT A CHARMER. GoT 2 GET ME oNE oF THEM. ENJoYABLE EVERY TIME I CoME BACK 2 THIS. (S.M.)
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Date: 6/12/2010 6:39:00 PM
I figured this out. Once upon a time a waffle and a pancake went out on a date. Both decide that their love(in the form of syrup) was so sweet and consuming that they started to talk of deep love and butter. Ended up consuming each other in passionate luv. And the coffee helped digest their never ending passion. How's that?
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Date: 6/10/2010 5:06:00 AM
Well if u keep up with the national news..our American dollar is dead in the markets ..very weak at best.. and what we used to get for a dollar is no more.. bang..meaning bargains.. for one dollar those days long gone... got it? just had to enter..its a contest u know.. and as many may think I was NOT complaining about the last Limerick contest ..just wanted a point of view from a fresh pair of eyes and it was completely taken out of context... from certain nameless people. "Sweetheart" luv all
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Date: 6/9/2010 10:31:00 PM
This is so interesting and good brain vibrations.
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Date: 6/8/2010 11:22:00 AM
Youwere right. Thanks for your comment today. Agape, Moses
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Date: 6/8/2010 10:24:00 AM
P.D> I liked this as it was disjointed, but berserk with a purpose. I could see the Riddler delivering this after having been slugged by the Batman. It has intermittent flashes f coherence, then random insanity, which if you weren't aiming for, you achieved anyway. I enjoyed it. Sorry about the censorship trouble. I have codes myself, but in the spirit of Art and capitalism, let the majority and the market decide. Johhny Depp is the upcoming Riddler?! Wow! Regards, Gerard.
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Date: 6/8/2010 6:54:00 AM
SUAVE, MEXICAN. WRU- GTC-L.) THIS IS 2 FUNNY. I LIKE,LUV YA.-SKAT
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Date: 6/7/2010 8:29:00 PM
That was good for a few laughs... Seems like it was just a random poem that didn't want to make any sense. ^.^
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Date: 6/6/2010 7:10:00 PM
A brilliant piece of non sensible write relieving the readers from sad and heavy readings to keep laughing with you from beginning to end. Love it my friend. And many thanks for your precious comments on Patradoot. Love and best wishes......Ravindra.....Poet D
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Date: 6/6/2010 4:32:00 PM
SIDDY, THIS IS BEYOND REALITY. I GOT 2 LAUGH WITH EVERYONE ON THIS. ROYAL U R 2 CUTE. ALONG WITH EVERY COMMENT ON THIS. Love ya L.) skat
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Date: 6/6/2010 4:17:00 PM
lol "thieves break and leave me gold???" that line cracked me up, cause when they break in the usual thing to do is take your gold not leave you gold hahaX), love this non sensable write lol,, love it, =(^.^)=Royal
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Date: 6/6/2010 3:11:00 PM
so many twists and turns...niice write!
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Date: 6/6/2010 5:56:00 AM
Well written poem with fantasy, P.D.! Enjoyed reading it this afternoon and thank you for your kind comments...Have a great Sunday...Gert
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