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Rickshaw labia

Rickshaw |abia punish my honey drink my creamy dream eat my children between fat-bread Stulted pedantic canker-bloom Your bird-plucked eyes will gas-up and advertise

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Date: 10/16/2016 8:23:00 PM
OH MY, now that was sure vividly different!!Your style is unique
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Robert Warlov
Date: 10/17/2016 5:57:00 PM
I was just cursing her out, but being a poet... well. "Pedantic" probably sent her to the dictionary.
Date: 10/11/2016 7:48:00 AM
Bat shyte crazy good, no matter how you arrived at this juncture. Uncharted territory here.
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Robert Warlov
Date: 10/11/2016 2:19:00 PM
High-praise from someone whose work reflects such deft, surgical precision. My obsequious thanks.
Date: 10/11/2016 6:15:00 AM
Result from a twenty-year marriage to a sociopath.
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