Richer Beauty

Greener
cobalt skies, sun
and redbird songs we missed
when flowers are back, so fragrant
and dreamy butterflies waft in splendor
in budding days of renewal.
Emerging beautiful
awaited long,
Greener


Written on 1/16/2023
For: Pen a Rictameter, Hopes of 
springs return Poetry Contest
Sponsor: M. L. Kiser

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/28/2023 3:13:00 PM

just so beautiful. Congrats for the win

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 1/28/2023 4:35:00 PM

Many thanks, Andrea. :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/28/2023 7:29:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. I "Love" this write, Spring and butterflies. Have a blessed day/weekend................

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 1/28/2023 11:17:00 AM

Thank you for your kind congratulations. Blessings and hugs. :)

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 1/28/2023 6:43:00 AM

Beautiful Evelyn. Congratulations on your win! :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/17/2023 5:36:00 AM

Very nice…the mix of red and green :)

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 1/17/2023 8:44:00 AM

Thank you, Kim. :)

Joanna Daniel

Date: 1/17/2023 3:38:00 AM

Well done, Evelyn:)

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 1/17/2023 8:42:00 AM

Thank you, Jo. :)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/16/2023 10:58:00 PM

Spring seems so far away. Soon we will be in the middle of cold winter.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 1/17/2023 8:42:00 AM

Yet after that, it gets greener. ;)

Sotto Poet

Date: 1/16/2023 6:41:00 PM

Well-penned Rictameter, Evelyn. With your words, you conveyed such a great scene of birds, butterflies, and cobalt stars. Good luck with the contest.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 1/16/2023 8:55:00 PM

Thank you so much for your very gratifying remarks, Lasaad. Have a wonderful week.