Ribbon In the Wind

Look...
               How it dances
                  And twirls
                     At the mercy 
                       Of the soft
                         Evening breeze
                          How it dances
                         With such grace
                        Slithering like
                      A coral snake
                    Dancing in the...
                   Wind with joy
                 A blissful surrender



Date written and posted: 03/24/2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Gorelick Avatar
March 25, 2019 at 5:40 PM
Really like the way you did this...Nice work! BG
Ibeh Avatar
March 25, 2019 at 6:35 PM
Thank you, Barbara:-)
Lawless Avatar
March 25, 2019 at 8:25 AM
Nicely done Edward, paints a vivid picture of the migrant ribbon
Ibeh Avatar
March 25, 2019 at 2:30 PM
Thank you, John:-)
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