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Ribbon In the Wind

Look... How it dances And twirls At the mercy Of the soft Evening breeze How it dances With such grace Slithering like A coral snake Dancing in the... Wind with joy A blissful surrender Date written and posted: 03/24/2019

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Date: 3/25/2019 5:40:00 PM
Really like the way you did this...Nice work! BG
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/25/2019 6:35:00 PM
Thank you, Barbara:-)
Date: 3/25/2019 8:25:00 AM
Nicely done Edward, paints a vivid picture of the migrant ribbon
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/25/2019 2:30:00 PM
Thank you, John:-)

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