Rhythms of the Seashore

The ocean journey ends
gathering at the shore.
An undulating sea climaxes
onto the sandy beach
depositing tangles of
seaweed, debris and shells.

Rocky sea caves reverberate
booms of incoming waves 
while the incessant cries of
seagulls squawk as they 
compete with pelicans for food.

Sea breezes whip up
salty sprays, like diamond 
rivulets that splash 
skyward toward the sunlight.
A wild symphony of 
nature, unchanged by the
passage of time.    





Written on 2/1/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Callus Avatar
February 11, 2016 at 5:35 AM
You delight with descriptive powers, Laura! Lovely imagery which tempts the reader to partake in the beauty of your seashore. ~ Congratulations ... making it to the final list was not easy, since there was great competition. Regards // paul
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February 11, 2016 at 5:13 PM
Thank you very much, Paul! I am thankful I got in there somewhere, as I know Craig has very high standards when he sponsors/judges a contest. I appreciate your encouraging words :)
A. Sharma Avatar
February 11, 2016 at 4:20 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning write Laura!!
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February 11, 2016 at 5:12 PM
Thank you, Dr. Upma :)
Wigley Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 11:16 PM
Lovely piece, laura, hang on while I get my bathing costume on. Congrats! Viv x
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February 11, 2016 at 12:07 AM
HahaaH! Okay ;)
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February 10, 2016 at 8:41 PM
Congratulations on your win!
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February 11, 2016 at 12:08 AM
Thanks, Susan. I appreciate your kind words :)
Scars Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 4:56 PM
Laura,congrats on your placement in the contest!!! *smiles* -luloo
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February 10, 2016 at 7:29 PM
Thank you, Laura :)
Dietrich Avatar
February 2, 2016 at 3:25 PM
succinct and very descriptive passage. I like it a lot.
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February 2, 2016 at 11:29 PM
Thanks, Andrea! I'm glad you like this :)
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February 2, 2016 at 3:32 PM
Thanks, Andrea! I'm glad you like this :)
Turner Avatar
February 2, 2016 at 7:25 AM
A very descriptive write. Your words paint a beautiful picture. I'm certain this will do well. A7
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February 2, 2016 at 3:31 PM
Thanks so much, Viv! Glad you liked my poem :)
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February 2, 2016 at 11:21 AM
Thank you, Daniel, for stopping by with your kind comments:)
Wigley Avatar
February 2, 2016 at 12:24 AM
My God, Laura, I can even smell Ozone! Lovely, descriptive, soothing piece, I'm sure it will do well. Viv x
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February 2, 2016 at 12:50 PM
Thanks so much, Viv! Glad you liked my poem :)
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February 2, 2016 at 11:21 AM
Thanks so much, Viv! Glad you liked my poem :)
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February 2, 2016 at 12:17 AM
A glimpse of the infinity. Thank you for the pleasant experience of reading the nice poem.
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February 2, 2016 at 12:50 PM
Thank you very much for your kind words, Probir! I'm so glad you enjoyed my poem :)
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February 2, 2016 at 11:22 AM
Thank you very much for your kind words, Probir! I'm so glad you enjoyed my poem :)
Laurie Avatar
February 1, 2016 at 11:59 PM
Hello Laura ... you have painted a great picture with words - good luck - Lindsay
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February 2, 2016 at 12:13 AM
Thank you, Lindsay! I appreciate your kind and encouraging comments:)
Osho Avatar
February 1, 2016 at 11:00 PM
excellent laura
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February 1, 2016 at 11:23 PM
I'm glad you enjoyed my poem, Francis. Thank you :)
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