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Rhythms of Fate and Sound

Written: January 08, 2025 for contest Sponsored by: Di11y Da11y 1. Newton's Laws of Motion: Third Law: For every action, there is an equal and opposite reaction. 4. Quantum Superposition: A particle can exist in multiple states or places simultaneously until measured. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Oliveros accordion's honeyed drone flows over chimes with a soft whistle buoyantly fluting In between breathes of characters. We loiter, extraneous, entangled lives in a state of limbo Dreams flicker as Schrödinger cat. Every interaction sends a wave, and feelings clash within~ The force of love rivalry is restricted by intangible powers~ As we sink into quiet depths, Entropy seeps into aged patterns. . . Instantaneous movements fester, and longing is frozen in clarity. Thermodynamics set heat gain or loss, divided by warmth yields entropy~ Word pulse changes color. Sound travels across time and space. Redshifted craves blur instantly. We hunt memory cobwebs, navigating over this light-and-dark maze, constantly seeking the quickest path. Dreamt corridors bend toward us, perception distorts the fastest trip home. All actions have consequences~ We are moved by inert forces, as time-etched Newton laws. Rebounding moments shape kismet. Choices teeter on fate. Body rhythms align with, physics quiet concerto. Schrödinger hoped for our serenity. Life's diverse quantum spectrums,  each unseen wave or particle is strong, each minute, a heart Doppler echo,  becomes clearer as entropy slows. Each action balances the other.

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Date: 1/9/2025 3:24:00 PM
SP, your knowledge of physics and the way you write it into poetry makes me smile! Hard to believe we can boil down everything we experience in these terms! Smiles!
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Date: 1/9/2025 1:18:00 PM
Woah, SOTTO! This is deep and beautiful, work, with so many original ideas. Physics applied in " every action of consequences" wow and "Word pulse changes color" how powerful..."Redshifted craves blur instantly" - "perception distorts the fastest trip home"...
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Date: 1/8/2025 11:08:00 PM
wonderfully penned
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