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Rhythmic Slumber

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Strumming guitar necks
In a dyslexic manner
While on lsd

Mind turning pages 
Psychedelic music sheets
Colorful notes dance
 
Life wind cries Jimi
Living in a purple haze
Rainbow rhythm sleeps



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Copyright © Abe Lopez | Year Posted 2010

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James Fraser Date: 5/13/2010 12:40:00 PM Excellent tribute piece to a brilliant rock guitarist Abe, many congratulations on your win in Raul's fine contest >> James Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 5/13/2010 7:35:00 AM As always, Abe....you have your unique and wonderful way with words! I love this unique poem, it says so much, so few words, but has such impact! Congratulations dear Abe! ~ Love, Carrie Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 5/13/2010 7:03:00 AM Congrats Abe on your winning poem in the Jimi contest with this great synopsis of his life and times in the Choka form .. a well deserved win so enjoy your victory ..luv.. "Sweetheart" Login to Reply

Savannah Rose Harper Date: 5/13/2010 6:23:00 AM Hey Congratz dude! Spectacularificous HalfBreedMexican Be out!!!! ~$@V@^^@#~ Login to Reply

Raul Moreno Date: 5/12/2010 9:31:00 PM Abe, congratulations on your success in my Jimi Hendrix Contest...Raul Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 5/12/2010 9:04:00 AM Just a note kind sir, I am aware of the Native American plight and would like some verses on it. I was trying to say...so much real human, blood,s weat & tears went on..why were so few remembering and giving me dry history recounts? There were miners & asian chain gangs on the railroads, there were mountain men..so much color, scents, tastes, sights....this was the westward movement. Loved your verse above! A real winner! Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 5/11/2010 7:47:00 PM Sweet write Abe and good luck in Raul's contest .. u captured Jimi perfectly in your lines.. enjoyed ...luv.. from the "Sweetheart" Login to Reply

Charmaine Chircop Date: 5/9/2010 10:34:00 PM Superb work Abe.. especially the verse..Rainbow rhythm sleeps..I love it...Charma Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 5/9/2010 2:48:00 AM A wonderful write, Abe Login to Reply

Doris Culverhouse Date: 5/8/2010 5:55:00 PM such a waste of a great talent!! Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 5/8/2010 4:16:00 PM Was watching Jimi on youtube last night and noticed that "dyslexic manner" of which you write, Abe. The stars in stripe formations are a nice touch. He did seem to live and create art in a "purple haze." Love, Carolyn Login to Reply