Rhythm of the Stars

Caught in the thrall of moonlight

she dances alone, swaying

to the rhythm of the stars

singing to the sky







Dodoitsu.   Margaret Foster Sept 2011

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Terry Miller

December 31, 2024 at 1:26 AM

excellent little gem, congratulations

Margaret Foster

December 31, 2024 at 6:16 PM

Thank you, Terry. Wishing you a happy New Year.

Line Gauthier

December 30, 2024 at 7:09 PM

A different title would greatly enhance the poem. Because it is a 6-line brevity, repeating one of the lines seems to be a missed opportunity to bring in an extra element.

Margaret Foster

December 31, 2024 at 1:16 AM

I see what you mean about the title. I’ll keep it in mind. thank you for placing me. Slàinte Mhath 2025

Gerald Kithinji

August 3, 2013 at 4:12 AM

There in the thrall of moonlight...and I watch this from the slopes of Mt Kenya!

Carol Sunshine Brown

September 25, 2011 at 12:15 PM

Congratulations on your win in the contest of Tracie "Dodoitsu Darkness" Margaret. Love, Carol

Elizabeth Wesley

September 23, 2011 at 10:40 PM

I love all that astral stuff and your verse has the cold echoes of a moonlit nigh. So beautifully said Marg. PS Thanks for your visit and kind comment.