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Caught in the thrall of moonlight she dances alone, swaying to the rhythm of the stars singing to the sky
Dodoitsu. Margaret Foster Sept 2011

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Date: 12/31/2024 1:26:00 AM
excellent little gem, congratulations
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Margaret Foster
Date: 12/31/2024 6:16:00 PM
Thank you, Terry. Wishing you a happy New Year.
Date: 12/30/2024 7:09:00 PM
A different title would greatly enhance the poem. Because it is a 6-line brevity, repeating one of the lines seems to be a missed opportunity to bring in an extra element.
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Margaret Foster
Date: 12/31/2024 1:16:00 AM
I see what you mean about the title. I’ll keep it in mind. thank you for placing me. Slàinte Mhath 2025
Date: 8/3/2013 4:12:00 AM
There in the thrall of moonlight...and I watch this from the slopes of Mt Kenya!
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Date: 9/25/2011 12:15:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest of Tracie "Dodoitsu Darkness" Margaret. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/23/2011 10:40:00 PM
I love all that astral stuff and your verse has the cold echoes of a moonlit nigh. So beautifully said Marg. PS Thanks for your visit and kind comment.
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Date: 9/23/2011 2:44:00 PM
This one is excellent..Emotive work..Congrats on your winning work..Sara
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Date: 9/22/2011 5:23:00 PM
Congrats Margaret on second place win with this exquisite poetry entry my friend..luv..
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Date: 9/22/2011 4:38:00 AM
Conmgratulations on the win in the contest of tracie,Margaret
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Date: 9/20/2011 1:30:00 AM
Needing to hurry tonight, but again, I LOVE this one.
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Date: 9/18/2011 1:55:00 AM
gosh, I just love yours, Marg. I do not know how I will do one after seeing all the ones tonight. Maybe it is even filled up by now!! Luv,Andrea
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Date: 9/17/2011 3:04:00 PM
This is wonderful!!Best wishes Margaret.
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