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Rhythm of Fresh Start

Blow the trumpet, rhythm of fresh start - Hummingbirds nectar-sing-along. Ruby passion throat, pink beak sips. Chest puffed up, an emerald heart. The flapping of yellow wings, strong. Flower-power relationships. The sweetest thing, a pleasant art. Romantic flight of nature’s song. Bird flips over God’s arrant scripts. Memory of each flower, smart - Its timing, to each bud belong. Petals alive with hummer’s lips. Hovering hummingbird busy. Delirious design - dizzy. (Due to PS new contest rules did not include footer info)

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Date: 6/26/2023 5:22:00 AM
Wonderful write Kim, Congrats on your win
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/30/2023 5:55:00 AM
Thank you, Joseph! :)
Date: 6/15/2023 3:03:00 AM
Your imagery excels. Well done.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/15/2023 8:13:00 AM
I appreciate you, Victor! :) Hugs
Date: 6/14/2023 2:47:00 PM
A very gorgeous poem here. Loved it!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/15/2023 8:13:00 AM
Thank you, Paige!
Date: 6/14/2023 8:25:00 AM
This is enchanting, trilling to read! Such a lovingly portrait of a spring morning, and how winged nature flutters blessedly with scent and blossom. Love it!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/14/2023 9:48:00 AM
Thank you so much, Joe!
Date: 6/14/2023 7:48:00 AM
I love everything about the motion of your hummingbird poem, Kim. I have to boo/hiss the new contest rules, if in fact they are put into practice. If it ain't broke...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/14/2023 9:48:00 AM
Definitely different… Thank you!
Date: 6/14/2023 6:56:00 AM
Beautiful poetry, Kim: Blow the trumpet, rhythm of fresh start -Hummingbirds nectar-sing-along. Ruby passion throat, pink beak sips... Much enjoyed your descriptions.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/14/2023 9:49:00 AM
I appreciate you, Vijay! Thank you!

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