Kim Rodrigues Poet Rhyme

Rhythm of Fresh Start

Blow the trumpet, rhythm of fresh start -
Hummingbirds nectar-sing-along.
Ruby passion throat, pink beak sips.

Chest puffed up, an emerald heart.
The flapping of yellow wings, strong.
Flower-power relationships.

The sweetest thing, a pleasant art.
Romantic flight of nature’s song.
Bird flips over God’s arrant scripts.

Memory of each flower, smart -
Its timing, to each bud belong.
Petals alive with hummer’s lips.

Hovering hummingbird busy.
Delirious design - dizzy.


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Joseph May June 26, 2023 at 5:22 AM Wonderful write Kim, Congrats on your win Kim Rodrigues June 30, 2023 at 5:55 AM Thank you, Joseph! :)

Victor Buhagiar June 15, 2023 at 3:03 AM Your imagery excels. Well done. Kim Rodrigues June 15, 2023 at 8:13 AM I appreciate you, Victor! :) Hugs

Paige Hind June 14, 2023 at 2:47 PM A very gorgeous poem here. Loved it! Kim Rodrigues June 15, 2023 at 8:13 AM Thank you, Paige!

Joseph P. DiMino June 14, 2023 at 8:25 AM This is enchanting, trilling to read! Such a lovingly portrait of a spring morning, and how winged nature flutters blessedly with scent and blossom. Love it! Kim Rodrigues June 14, 2023 at 9:48 AM Thank you so much, Joe!

Lin Lane June 14, 2023 at 7:48 AM I love everything about the motion of your hummingbird poem, Kim. I have to boo/hiss the new contest rules, if in fact they are put into practice. If it ain't broke... Kim Rodrigues June 14, 2023 at 9:48 AM Definitely different… Thank you!

Vijay Pandit June 14, 2023 at 6:56 AM Beautiful poetry, Kim: Blow the trumpet, rhythm of fresh start -Hummingbirds nectar-sing-along. Ruby passion throat, pink beak sips... Much enjoyed your descriptions. Kim Rodrigues June 14, 2023 at 9:49 AM I appreciate you, Vijay! Thank you!