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Rhythm of a River

river, flow by my feet~ as waters of my mind do overtake and wet the page and droplets step-dance to create, backstage. for manufactured, processed verse could never pulse with life, the rhythm of a river.
Rolling with the Rs: Sponsor Nette Onclaud 05/08/25 [On AI]

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Date: 8/6/2025 7:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 8/6/2025 7:21:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest, Sneha :) - hugs
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Date: 8/5/2025 6:33:00 AM
- Beautifully written about the rhythm of the river, Sneha :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 8/5/2025 5:06:00 AM
Very nicely penned - excellent! You are quite right about a river...very, very difficult to put into words what is truly felt when experiencing the joys of standing next to running water. Appeals to our most basic instinct - our life blood - water! :) john
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Date: 8/5/2025 5:03:00 AM
Ooh I don't think I've seen a rictameter. It looks a bit like a double etheree. Very nice
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