Rhythm of a River



river, flow by my feet~ as waters of my mind do overtake and wet the page and droplets step-dance to create, backstage. for manufactured, processed verse could never pulse with life, the rhythm of a river.
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Dietrich Avatar
August 9, 2025 at 1:15 PM
Wow, so creative. Congrats in the contest
Rodrigues Avatar
August 6, 2025 at 1:18 PM
Congrats, Sneha!
Andresen Avatar
August 6, 2025 at 7:21 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest, Sneha :) - hugs
Andresen Avatar
August 5, 2025 at 6:33 AM
- Beautifully written about the rhythm of the river, Sneha :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
Fleming Avatar
August 5, 2025 at 5:06 AM
Very nicely penned - excellent! You are quite right about a river...very, very difficult to put into words what is truly felt when experiencing the joys of standing next to running water. Appeals to our most basic instinct - our life blood - water! :) john
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