Rhythm of a river

Contest: Rolling With The Rs
Sponsor: Nette Onclaud
Date Written: 3rd August, 2025 Placement: Fourth
•••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••• Heartbeat, loud in my chest, sings with sweet melody, like the cadence of a streamlet, when its silver ribbons drape the mountains, with a smile that delights the sands, as it cascades the slopes and thunders—like heartbeat.
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Dietrich Avatar
August 9, 2025 at 1:16 PM
Oh this is splendid. Congrats on the win
Famuyiwa Avatar
August 9, 2025 at 1:47 PM
Thanks Andrea
Andresen Avatar
August 6, 2025 at 7:23 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest, Maclawrence :) - hugs
Famuyiwa Avatar
August 6, 2025 at 8:34 AM
Thanks Anne-Lise.
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