Rhythm and Rhyme

RHYTHM AND RHYME

Often times it seems to me,
That others do not often see,
Poetic licence has it's place from time to time.

Often they will mark some off,
And mayhap give a little cough,
When for flavor I will use it in my rhymes.

They think sometimes that I can't spell,
And often they are wont to tell,
That they think my rhyme and rhythm's off a bit;

But it depends on where you're from,
How the count in words will come,
For dialect has much control of it.

How the word itself's pronounced,
Gives it measure, gives it bounce,
And the rhyme and rhythm will come to;

So figure on who wrote it,
And the accent there will show it,
Does have rhyme and count and rhythm will ensue.

                                                                       Judy Ball

No offense to anyone. I wrote this a long time ago. Not complaining about anything, 
just writing a rhyme and pointing out a truism too.

Hope y'all like it.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Wesley Avatar
July 4, 2011 at 12:30 PM
A great verse Judy with style and color.
Williams Avatar
June 28, 2011 at 9:09 AM
hey Judy i do like it and it's very true, thanks for your kind words, David.
Ball Avatar
June 29, 2011 at 7:40 PM
Thanks so much David. Glad you enjoyed it. God Bless, JB
Heffington Avatar
June 28, 2011 at 4:47 AM
I like this, Judy! :) And I usually go with rhyming poetry, simply because that's what I enjoy writing. But you pose a good case here, and I love what you wrote about dialect...thanks for your sweet comments about my poetry! I really appreciate it!
Foulk Avatar
June 27, 2011 at 11:55 AM
I have a friend who thinks that is a poem does not rhyme it is not a poem, he would like this one as i do also.
Ball Avatar
June 27, 2011 at 1:58 PM
Thank you so much my friend I appreciate that as most of my poems do rhyme however I do write in Prose as well as Acrostic and Haiku too. I have also done some Senryu and Cameos too so I do veer of the natural path for me sometimes. I have posted some of my Haiku and Cameo. Glad you enjoyed this. I appreciate your stopping by so much. God Bless, JB
Dietrich Avatar
June 26, 2011 at 2:06 PM
The other day I tried to comment to another poem and this site wouldn't let me. GRRRR. So I am gonna try another comment somewhere after this one. About the bird on my shoulder, methinks its name is "fibromyalgia" I'm killing the bird named "bone spur"this wednesday with a shoulder surgery but this other one the doc says he can't do anything about it. he is not sure what is causing the burning sensation on my back. If it only WERE a monkey on my back. haha. LUv, Andrea
Ball Avatar
June 26, 2011 at 3:13 PM
Ooohoohoohoo! Ah Feels Yo Pain Sistah! Glad you enjoyed this little ditty. It was fun to do. God Bless and good luck in your surgery. I'll say a prayer for you. JB
Mehta Avatar
June 25, 2011 at 6:35 PM
Lovely, creative and thoughtful expressions, Judy
Ball Avatar
June 25, 2011 at 8:07 PM
Thank you so much my friend for the kind words. Glad you liked it. God Bless, JB
Dietrich Avatar
June 25, 2011 at 4:46 PM
I agree with you. It's very true that some words can be completely different from one region to another or from one English speaking country to another. good message!
Ball Avatar
June 25, 2011 at 5:37 PM
Boy ain't that the truth. Thank you so much my friend. Glad you enjoyed it. God Bless, JB
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