Rhyming-I Think

Not a good day, I want to fly away, 
Disapear into dispair, dying from lying,
I'll just go ding, like an old toaster thing,
It toasts bread, and never goes to bed,
Awake through the pain and strains,
Crying tears of fears,
Not beliving all of the dealings of drugs,
That is untill I got mugged,
Cought in a frought, not one way out,
I turn insideout,
Burning and yearning for hope,
But "no" said the pope.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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De Paz Avatar
June 28, 2013 at 9:12 AM
Good poem where creativity is present. There are some misspelled words (disapear; burnning) you can fix, but I find interesting the rhyming inside the verses.
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