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Rippling brook rushes Swollen with spring rain gushes.. Eddie place bulrushes Alligator suns Basking her tough hide, sun buns.. Hippo destroys fun Spring turns winter's tide Nature comes quickly alive.. Bees buzz hopes for bride For: Carol Brown Contest: "Whats' The Buzz"

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Date: 4/10/2011 8:31:00 AM
It's the coolest poem ever
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Date: 3/11/2011 8:27:00 AM
Congrats Sara on your well deserved win in the contest!---kashinath
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Date: 3/10/2011 4:01:00 PM
That's a great Haiku...SK
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Date: 3/10/2011 12:20:00 PM
Wonderful Haiku sequence, Sara. Many congrat's on your BIG WIN. Lainie
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Date: 3/10/2011 10:33:00 AM
Such a pleasure to see you Sara near the top with this worthy fourth place victory. Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/10/2011 9:32:00 AM
This one was awesome and unique, Sara. So pleased to see you in the winners' circle. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/10/2011 6:21:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in my contest Sara. Thank you for supporting my contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/10/2011 12:14:00 AM
bes buzz hopes for bride. Wow. many congrats dear friend.
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Date: 3/9/2011 6:30:00 PM
Congratulations, Sara on this fun entry! RAY
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Date: 3/9/2011 5:14:00 PM
heh heh cute one Sara. Congratulations to you on this fine win
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Date: 3/9/2011 4:15:00 PM
Congratulations Sara. you're still in there writing. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/9/2011 2:49:00 PM
and there you go, sara... " alligator suns", wow! CONGRATS wiht hugggs..:) huggs, nette
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Date: 3/9/2011 2:33:00 PM
Congrats Sara on your wonderful win in Carol's contest with this expressive entry my friend.. enjoy another top ten sweet success with luv..
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Date: 3/9/2011 2:25:00 PM
Congratulations on the fourth place win in the contest of carol, Sara
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Date: 3/9/2011 2:09:00 PM
Congratulations, Sara, Glad to see it here again,this time in the winner circle. Luv, andrea
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Date: 3/5/2011 10:51:00 AM
I usually don't like the Haiku form too much but I did enjoy this one. Your use of rhyme and your descriptive words made the scene easy to picture sara
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Date: 3/4/2011 1:03:00 PM
enjoyed reading today
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Date: 3/4/2011 5:34:00 AM
In reply to your reply, first of all i think eveybody is guilly of murder in the mind even you, and you can't deny that you haven't felt like that in your earlier years or a least thought about it to be a least truhtful eh? Secondly I think you have a distorted view of what any of my poetry talks about you always seem to get the wrong impression of my words which lead me to believe you read but never understand, spend sometime intepreting correctly before you ralley at the poolpit
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Date: 3/4/2011 5:32:00 AM
Hope all is well Sara and u enjoy a happy weekend luv.. hi to Doris and prayers to everyone ...
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Date: 3/3/2011 2:53:00 PM
very funny piece, enjoyed reading it.
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Date: 3/3/2011 1:15:00 PM
Smile ~ i love the touch of humour mixed amid the more serious i might say reflections along with the incorporation of nature itself which in turn makes this a very lovely layered poetic canvas my dear and, 'thank you,' for stopping by and blessing my humble self with, "Your Beauties," precious presense and kind com ~ love, Always, christopher ~
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Date: 3/3/2011 12:09:00 PM
in reply to your reply there is no such thing as doing wrong or right only what we as humanity can asses in our own psyche, besides there are much worser thing u and i can agree on besides a plant that grows from the earth
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Date: 3/3/2011 12:08:00 PM
a delightful scene of nature's lively landscape, sara...more good health and lovely poetry to you.. winning wishes! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 3/3/2011 7:39:00 AM
Yes! Spring makes you think of water, hippos, gators, bulrushes. Enjoyed these Haiku mucho. Love, daver
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Date: 3/3/2011 7:02:00 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest Sara. Love, Carol
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