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Rhymed Senryu Moonlight Truth



                         

        Tell the truth always
               Even in moonlit hallways
                       Souls are passageways


                 
                      7/1/2024


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July 3, 2024 at 9:21 AM
Wise words Pangie, accompanied by a lovely moonlit picture… Beryl
Romios Avatar
July 3, 2024 at 9:51 AM
Beryl, your visit is awesome surprise! I realy liked the image as you did, that melded so well, with the Senyru! Watching UK news in ten minutes and the election resukts tomorrow. May your country be blessed with a capable leader.! Pangie
Buhagiar Avatar
July 3, 2024 at 1:46 AM
You convey our emotions brilliantly. Blessings.
Romios Avatar
July 3, 2024 at 6:03 AM
Hello my dear Vincent, we are having five days id 112 defrees Faarenheit, problem plus+++, our power provider lowers the power, or we can lose all power, i have ceiling and roomfans everywhere ! But Dont do well when I am melting. Havent felt wll. Thus post and can only comment! Asking your gracious forgiveness please? Thank you for your time and friendship, lo, these many years. Ppangie!
Fowler Avatar
July 2, 2024 at 1:27 PM
Lovely thought here Pangie. Our soul's expression of inner being. Outstanding, like yourself. :)
Romios Avatar
July 2, 2024 at 2:25 PM
Linda, dear friend,… You are divinine friend plus such a generour poet. I loved, loved, your summation! I am but a humble poet.’))) Merci beaucoup, Pangie
Eagle Avatar
July 2, 2024 at 12:42 PM
This poem is just like a melody. Your creativity continues to amaze me.
Romios Avatar
July 2, 2024 at 1:26 PM
How lovely to notice the melodious essence of this piiece. And,to acknowledge my creativity! Just lovely of you! Merci beacoup~ Pangie
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 2, 2024 at 11:22 AM
Hello Panagiota, I like this poem. M y fv. Hugs. / Darlene/ xxx
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 2, 2024 at 4:08 PM
HellThank you Po Panagiota, thank you. Hugs. xxx
Romios Avatar
July 2, 2024 at 12:39 PM
Hey Darlene - you are a generous soul to this grateful poet.. blessings. I thought of you and I when I chose the image of the cat under the moon! -)) @ Pabgie @
Elliott Avatar
July 2, 2024 at 10:31 AM
A huge FAV, dear friend, a brilliant gem! xoxx
Romios Avatar
July 2, 2024 at 11:02 AM
Oh, goodness. You touched my soul for FAViing this.. ((its one of mne, too!)) Everytime I read it,it reveals another depth of meaning I did not see when I wrote it…the tone is so univeral in appeal! Pangie
Lawless Avatar
July 2, 2024 at 5:34 AM
very interesting Pangie...the muse shall be mulling this all day...
Romios Avatar
July 2, 2024 at 7:34 AM
Hi John, sometimes it takes a few words to write a poem and if you have any philosophical bent or you know with the means. To Be blunt about it, being a phony in life, whether in daylight or on under the bright moon is a curse. The last line tells the truth. Pangie
Jones Avatar
July 1, 2024 at 8:53 PM
Pangie I love the rhyme and it’s not always easy to tell the truth but it is always best.
Romios Avatar
July 1, 2024 at 9:03 PM
Hey, Karen! Without being real, who are we? Truth is best! It’s lime giving yourself a trophy in the face of derision. Thank you on the rhyme. I read the poem over and over, it has a mustique I love, Pangie
Wolf Avatar
July 1, 2024 at 8:51 PM
Whew! This one's deep. Keeps me thinking, P. Thanks for the brain stimulation on a summer's night. ~ gw
Romios Avatar
July 1, 2024 at 8:57 PM
Yes G! It has mulile meanings, Most keep our brains simmering and shaow-scented! Pangie
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