Rhyme - Whimsical Fantasy

pure and innocent was the founding
not a witch, death outstanding
family relief at sister’s drowning

Rhyme - Whimsical Fantasy        Contest: 3 Lines Writing Challenge Oct 2018
Written 10-28-2018		        Sponsor:  Dear Heart a.k.a. Broken Wings
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Allison Avatar
November 5, 2018 at 5:51 AM
Made me shiver Caren! Many congratulations on your win ;-) Hugs Jan xx
Krutsinger Avatar
November 5, 2018 at 7:04 AM
But Jan it was so true, right? Hahahaha
La France Avatar
November 3, 2018 at 12:35 PM
Caren, congratulations on your win in my contest ~
Krutsinger Avatar
November 3, 2018 at 7:07 PM
Thank you. I appreciate it. You always challenge me.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
November 3, 2018 at 12:29 PM
Creepy fun :) Congratulations on your win! xomo
Krutsinger Avatar
November 3, 2018 at 7:07 PM
I love creepy this close to Day of the Dead and Hallow's Eve.
Dietrich Avatar
November 2, 2018 at 2:18 PM
Good one for posting around Halloween time! Congrats on the win, Caren.
Krutsinger Avatar
November 2, 2018 at 2:37 PM
Thank you Andrea. I drove through Salem one time, and the hair on my head stood straight up. Fear imagined or real matters not.
Andresen Avatar
November 2, 2018 at 2:13 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Caren ... well done :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Krutsinger Avatar
November 2, 2018 at 4:07 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise.
Kiser Avatar
October 29, 2018 at 11:26 AM
Ooh, that smarts; good one.
Krutsinger Avatar
October 29, 2018 at 11:29 AM
I kept thinking "is this too harsh?" but of course it was not.
Bangalee Avatar
October 29, 2018 at 12:01 AM
The Pure- core of conscience and conscience is true driver of humanity. /// nice
Krutsinger Avatar
October 29, 2018 at 7:18 AM
It certainly is!
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