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Rhyme Master

Rhyme Master


Should I hearken or heed
From bondage I’ll be freed
For, Beat, Rhyme and Song
To Angels they belong!
	

**Dedicated to Just That Archaic Poet for his unending pursuit of Rhythm!

11th Oct’ 2013

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Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday

October 19, 2013 at 5:10 PM

Must go and visit the poetry of Just That Archaic Poet! Thanks for sharing! Very well penned, Joseph! Have a nice week-end Blessings, Hanitra

Joseph Matose

October 21, 2013 at 5:24 AM

Archaic is one hell of a great poet. You'll enjoy him! Friend, JM

Eileen Manassian

October 15, 2013 at 10:01 AM

What an amazing poem....I do like rhythm and beat. You have captured this well...Thanks for your recent visits to my work. You have left such encouraging posts. I wanted to make sure to come and thank you from the bottom of my heart.

Joseph Matose

October 15, 2013 at 10:30 AM

YOU'RE SUCH AN AMAZING POET. YOU REALLY WRITE FROM YOUR HEART. WHY ARE YOU NOT A MUSICIAN? (JOKE!). YOU'RE SO CAPTIVATING. THANKS. JM

Ken Carroll

October 14, 2013 at 12:36 AM

Hi Joseph, A nice write penned with honor...thanks for visiting my humble verse... Ken

Joseph Matose

October 14, 2013 at 12:43 AM

Hie Ken, I appreciate your comment. Thanks a lot Buddy! JM

Karen Anglesey

October 13, 2013 at 5:27 PM

Archaic certainly is a master of rhyme and should be acknowledged as such. Awesome poem and rhyme here :)

Joseph Matose

October 14, 2013 at 12:52 AM

Thanks for having and sharing my point of view. It's blatantly true! I promise to visit your work without fail, Karen. Friend JM

Anne-Lise Andresen

October 13, 2013 at 8:31 AM

- A lovely tribute to a friend !!! - Have a nice autumn Sunday, Joseph! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph Matose

October 14, 2013 at 12:50 AM

Anne!!! Great comment. I appreciate your regular visit to my poems. Have a nice day. Friend JM.

Demetrios Trifiatis

October 13, 2013 at 2:38 AM

Nearer to Beat, Rhyme and Song we come More like Angels in heavens we become! Brilliant couplet: An angel's voice!

Joseph Matose

October 13, 2013 at 7:40 AM

I also love the beat in your short and compact poems. I've since learned a lot by reading your work. Keep it up. I admire your maturity in poetry. Friend JM

Just That Archaic Poet

October 11, 2013 at 2:06 PM

Joseph, I am humbled to my core. This poem is beyond beautiful and touching. The thoughtfulness warms my heart immeasurably. I cannot thank you enough for this tribute; means more to me than I can express with mere words. I feel so incredibly and indescribably blessed to have met so many astonishingly supportive and wonderful people here. "Thank you" is not adequate enough to describe my gratefulness. You are one hell of a guy, and my appreciation for you runs deeper than you can know, my friend

Joseph Matose

October 11, 2013 at 2:09 PM

Archaic deserves praise for his well thought out work. I know the pangs of writing rhyme. You turn, twist & stretch your thinking capacity in order to create perfect that stirs souls. Other forms of poetry reflect the same strenuous effort which I shall not denigrate. Thanks and Good Night Rose! JM

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