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Rhyme God

Enter the Everest that devastates as he never ever rests and demonstrates his quick wit picnic of traits that place with lickety split flicks on the page the tricks of a contortionist wrist that emits embers at pace as he commits and performs on the centre stage with the impact of a storm from the biblical age the act of an adorned prolific rampage. Irresistible talent abundantly apparent you thought you'd witnessed ability but until now you hadn't when the rest in the business appear to be unskilled and transparent as their best rhymes diminish right here to be unfulfilled and redundant thus divested of finesse while it's clear to see you're thrilled in this moment.

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Date: 12/8/2018 4:26:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Nick!
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Date: 12/5/2018 6:15:00 PM
Fantastic rhyme!! Congratulations on your placement in my Rhyme Battle contest!
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Date: 10/29/2018 2:50:00 AM
Awesome rhymes! Well done
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Date: 10/31/2018 6:34:00 PM
thank you Jay :)
Date: 10/19/2018 10:53:00 AM
Supreme rhyming Nick!
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Date: 10/19/2018 11:00:00 AM
thanks Nina :) 64 out 116 words used to rhyme lol
Date: 10/7/2018 9:29:00 AM
Wow, you got a way with words! Can't say I'm smart enough to discern its meaning, though I suspect it could be understood on several levels-- congrats on your win, Nick.
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Date: 10/7/2018 9:49:00 AM
Thanks lol it wasn't an easy write I admit, 64 words used as rhymes out of 116 in total I think, I can't imagine I'll top this anytime soon ha ha I will one day though, thanks again
Date: 10/6/2018 10:41:00 AM
Congrats on your top win, Nick. Well penned.
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Date: 10/6/2018 10:43:00 AM
thanks Line, means a lot :)