Rhyme God

Enter the Everest that devastates 
as he never ever rests and demonstrates 
his quick wit picnic of traits that place 
with lickety split flicks on the page 
the tricks of a contortionist wrist that emits embers at pace 
as he commits and performs on the centre stage 
with the impact of a storm from the biblical age 
the act of an adorned prolific rampage. 
Irresistible talent abundantly apparent 
you thought you'd witnessed 
ability but until now you hadn't 
when the rest in the business 
appear to be unskilled 
and transparent 
as their best rhymes diminish 
right here to be unfulfilled 
and redundant 
thus divested of finesse 
while it's clear to see you're thrilled 
in this moment.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 12/8/2018 4:26:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Nick!
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Date: 12/5/2018 6:15:00 PM
Fantastic rhyme!! Congratulations on your placement in my Rhyme Battle contest!
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Date: 10/29/2018 2:50:00 AM
Awesome rhymes! Well done
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Nick Trim
Date: 10/31/2018 6:34:00 PM
thank you Jay :)
Date: 10/7/2018 9:29:00 AM
Wow, you got a way with words! Can't say I'm smart enough to discern its meaning, though I suspect it could be understood on several levels-- congrats on your win, Nick.
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Nick Trim
Date: 10/7/2018 9:49:00 AM
Thanks lol it wasn't an easy write I admit, 64 words used as rhymes out of 116 in total I think, I can't imagine I'll top this anytime soon ha ha I will one day though, thanks again
Date: 10/6/2018 10:41:00 AM
Congrats on your top win, Nick. Well penned.
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Nick Trim
Date: 10/6/2018 10:43:00 AM
thanks Line, means a lot :)
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