Rhino Run

Rhino Run

I fancied to catch me a rhino
A black one, but caught an albino
It seemed that my lure
Was not quite secure
He broke loose and charged my behin--Oh!!

deborah burch©
6/14/2012
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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A.K.A. Reecie Avatar
July 31, 2012 at 2:25 AM
Goodness me! This is so cute.
Dietrich Avatar
June 15, 2012 at 8:09 AM
WOW, this is a GREAT limerick. LOL
Whitehead Avatar
June 14, 2012 at 1:11 PM
Ha ha ha - laughing all night long. It is surely the very best limerick that I've read, and I think children would adore it. Luv ya too.
Sivey Avatar
June 14, 2012 at 12:56 PM
Very clever and ingenious my friend! I really enjoyed this fine piece! Great Work!!
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
June 14, 2012 at 11:43 AM
Ha ha yes very funny love it and thanks xx
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