Rhetorical

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A knock on wood, You entered my office ... I was showing a young couple some diamonds - Oval Brilliants and Emerald Cuts, I recall quite clearly, "Message for you" ... you winked, and tucked a note into my hand. While they fawned over the 3/4ct F-VS1 in the pin spots, I unfolded the paper and read - 'I'm pregnant!' Oh, I never felt as warm and full and joyous ... How we celebrated and prepared ... for her, our sweetie! One of life's happiest moments, indeed. Why do you suppose I thought of that amazing instant, That incredibly exuberant occasion ... At the same time I threw my ring at your feet?!? Ever worthless ... ever meaningless, Gold turned to ragged rust, Joys, now made barren ... Love, now but war.

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