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Rhapsody In Red

When morning breaks in shades of wine... with claret skies to blush the dawn... I will stretch and yawn, and thank the night for this polished, apple day I will wait until the sun is high, where dew upon the rose is dry I'll have my cup, .. with toast and jam... then, make escape, ..........the quest begins, to seek my small reward It happens slowly... gathering reason from an untamed mind Up into the meadow where the brambles climb twisted and tangled, through burgandy vines while deftly my fingers, will probe the maze and reach for wild berries,.....warm from the haze Then, thumping their goodness, one after one into the bucket, dented and worn A search through thorns, a prick on my thumb till my back is ripe, and wet in the sun Finger painting my faded blue jeans Knowing my cheeks are flushing in pink Sucking sweet juice from two crimson thumbs Who cares a lick, of the thorns or a bee? I am a bee, buzzing serenity... plucking small bits of reason and sanity taking home goodness in a battered tin pail feeling alive, on a wild-flowered hill Tonight's sweet delight, is warm berry cobbler, oozing with goodness of juicy red gems staining my tongue, and turning lips scarlet dripping blood droplots onto my chin Yet never as splendid, or tasting as fine, as warmed by my smile, straight from the vine Picking red berries, and freeing my mind * * * * * * * * counting vermillion clouds that are spun then heading back home, with the red crimson sun _____________________________________ For Shadow Hamilton's Contest: "Colours" 5/4/13 Resubmitted to Skat's contest:

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Date: 5/21/2013 12:29:00 PM
Wow, what a wonderful tapestry in both picturesque as divine. Rare is this poetic jewel and intense somehow it's colours seem ? Love her canvas and shall favour both she and her woven splendours. Very beautiful and dig the passion and also, 'Happy Birthday.' Love, John
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Date: 5/19/2013 8:15:00 PM
This is absoluely brillint imagery, word use and elegant flow. Your poetry speaks volumes and oozes with talent as the berries dripping down your chin... I pictured myself in the scene every step of the way :)
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Date: 5/12/2013 4:16:00 PM
O-oh! What a beauty! Haha, I just listened to the blue one last week! Great title. Your verses are impeccable as always; just ripe with juicy descriptions. Great job with the theme too.
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Date: 5/9/2013 6:47:00 PM
Been there too....do you have chiggers where you're from? Yummy yummy...can I have ice cream? Congratulations
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Date: 5/9/2013 12:35:00 PM
Congrats on your win.
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Date: 5/9/2013 12:50:00 AM
Red-berried to reach the top... seet congrats, carrie.. still no.1 on soup!..:) hugggs
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Date: 5/8/2013 10:50:00 PM
Picking up the red berries............. wow. Many hearitest congrats for the win.
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Date: 5/8/2013 9:06:00 PM
It is beautiful Carrie,,,, congratulations~ LINDA
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Date: 5/8/2013 8:19:00 PM
You took this and wrapped it all up in red. Great job and win. congratulations, Carrie. Love, Joyce
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Date: 5/8/2013 1:06:00 PM
Wowing me again with your eloquence, Carrie. Your formatting enhances your poem even further. Congratulations on your well-deserved placement. Well done, my friend. :)
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Date: 5/7/2013 12:00:00 AM
You did this so cleverly, not hitting us on the head with your color but just integrating it into the poem through the tale of the red berries and your crimson thumbs, etc. LOVE it. It is sure to be a chart topper.
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Date: 5/6/2013 4:19:00 PM
What a sensory marvel You've penned. I can almost smell your sweet berry cobbler. An excellent write Carrie. I truly enjoyed each and every word. Hugs and warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 5/6/2013 12:04:00 PM
What a tasty treat! I'm a blackberry cobbler fan myself, but any cobbler will do! Yum!! RAY
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Date: 5/5/2013 11:03:00 AM
Fabulous write... fabulous feeling throughout! Loved it Carrie... hugs, Jack xoxox
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Date: 5/4/2013 10:03:00 PM
I will be there!!
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Date: 5/4/2013 10:03:00 PM
Wow!To my favs!
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