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I will write a few gathered words about my love who I adore and will collect his passion in a big glass jar . . . how our bodies fit together like puzzle pieces as he whispers in my ear when he touches me my blood is pulsing hot and my body ignites with a deep ache I breathe him in . . . and we are lost in a wild whirlwind of love with the sheets in a tangle . . . I love him so much and want to be sheltered in his arms ever oh, I have found my safe sanctuary in his beating heart my refuge in his soul and shelter from my pain he is my anchor and my life . . . I stroke his face and lips and he smiles down at me, and whispers, I l o v e you . . . and beyond the closed curtains the sun is shining, as he kisses my ruby lips . . . ______________________________ June 20, 2016 Poetry/Free Verse/'Rhapsody' Copyright Protected, ID 06-9572-18-20 All Rights Reserved, 2016, Constance La France Submitted to the contest, Free Verse On Love sponsor, Laura Loo First Place

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Line Gauthier

Date: 3/6/2018 9:42:00 PM

Congrats on your winning poem, BW. Beautiful imagery.

Charlie Smith

Date: 2/28/2018 11:45:00 AM

That'll get your blood flowing on a cold day, congratulations BW...

Constance La France
Date: 3/3/2018 9:29:00 AM

Tim, thank your for the comment and the congratulations ~

Vladislav Raven

Date: 2/26/2018 6:52:00 PM

Hi Constance, Congratulations on your first place win. It is much deserved with this excellent poem that sings into the heart with such gentle emotion. Thoughts can be so wonderful, touched with such powerful emotions. Your words always sing Constance. Have a wonderful Tuesday. Hugs....Mike. XX

Constance La France
Date: 3/3/2018 9:29:00 AM

Vlad, thank you for the congratulations and for that nice comment ~

Tom Cunningham

Date: 2/26/2018 10:50:00 AM

Congratulations on your win B.W. Tom

Constance La France
Date: 3/3/2018 9:30:00 AM

Tom, thank you for the congratulations ~

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/26/2018 7:12:00 AM

A passionate beautiful poem Constance! Congratulations on your first placement!. : )

Constance La France
Date: 3/3/2018 9:30:00 AM

Connie, thank you for the beautiful and the congratulations ~

Lu Loo

Date: 2/26/2018 5:27:00 AM

wow! Love the name first of all, so profound. And your words touch so deeply, so meaningful sweet lady! thank you and congrats : )-luloo

Constance La France
Date: 3/3/2018 9:32:00 AM

Laura, thank you for another great contest and for my placement, so honored ~

Arturo Michael

Date: 11/8/2017 6:14:00 AM

Dreams are like life itself, no less important...just as real...Nice work BW

Constance La France
Date: 3/3/2018 9:32:00 AM

Arturo, thank you for the visit and comment ~

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/8/2017 4:34:00 AM

Ah dreams, they can be so wonderful but yet so sad when you find out that it was only a dream and your life doesn't have what was within it! This write has so much passion within it, so full of internal love that I felt it within each line! Your picture goes so well with your poem, an awesome picture too! A swirling of emotions is felt all throughout your delightful poem my friend! What an exquisite piece, Great Work!!

Constance La France
Date: 3/3/2018 9:33:00 AM

Russell, thank you for visiting and for that beautiful comment ~