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Rewriting

Croaking of many bullfrogs At the break of day In a frozen barren wasteland Would surprise one I'll say North winds are howling all around I shiver from the cold Roaring breezes are eerie now But hearth's fire flames enfolds Thank you, Lord, for daily warmth And shelter from the cold Unfinished... I was watching Reflections on Daystar One day and they showed pictures of Alaska(I guess) in the dead of winter and I could hear Bullfrogs croaking..

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Delysia Hendricks

Date: 11/28/2013 5:23:00 PM

I feel for you guys having to endure such extreme temperatures. I've never seen snow in my life and I never want to. Herewith a warm hug to chase the cold, my friend. Licia :-)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/27/2013 9:25:00 PM

such a lovely write, hope you enjoyed your thanksgiving, always, ...p.d.

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 11/27/2013 1:40:00 PM

very beautifully drawn piece

Kelly Deschler

Date: 11/26/2013 11:04:00 PM

I can relate to the feeling of being thankful for warmth and shelter. We get some brutal winters here in Wisconsin, and I would not want to be without either! I am looking forward to reading this again, once it is finished. Great work so far, Sara!...Thank you for the nice visit, as always!

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/26/2013 6:27:00 PM

This is a fascinating write my friend! I surely loved reading this enlightening and dynamic poem here this evening! What a lovely piece Sara, you have delighted me with your great words! Excellent Work!!

Ken Carroll

Date: 11/26/2013 3:39:00 PM

Hi Sara, Wonderful winter wonder land write! Ken