Panagiota Romios Poet Senryu

Rewrite the Stars Senyru

              Rewrite the Stars…..Rhymed Senryu
                           


                               5/31/2025
                   

                         Be the enchantress,
                         Drive them to loving madness, 
                         Watch the moon undress.

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John Read June 17, 2025 at 8:41 AM There's nothing more enticing than a naked moon.

Darlene De Beaulieu June 2, 2025 at 3:32 PM Hello Panagiota, I enjoyed this creative poem you have writte4n. Hugs. /Darlene/ xxx Darlene De Beaulieu June 3, 2025 at 10:56 AM Hello Panagiot6a, I am hoping to have thie dream again. Without the fog. then i would know who the person is. thaqnk you. Hugs. /Darlene/ Panagiota Romios June 2, 2025 at 4:50 PM Heep Darle, thank you. May you feel fine and find the ysfreious mam in your dreams! Hugs, Pangie

Victor Buhagiar June 2, 2025 at 1:53 AM That was beautifully done. Poetic hugs. Panagiota Romios June 2, 2025 at 10:26 AM Victor, hi and thank you. So much. I have been feeling well lately and I’m not reading much forward or writing is either.. Hugs, Pangie

Linda Alice Fowler June 1, 2025 at 12:47 PM Admirable freedom dear friend. :) Panagiota Romios June 1, 2025 at 1:30 PM Indeed! The more I read it, the more aspects of life glow and blind me!))) Wishing you a good week! Pangie, thank you…

Gershon Wolf May 31, 2025 at 8:19 PM Whoa. I just got mooned. lol. Nice write, P. ~ gw Panagiota Romios May 31, 2025 at 9:15 PM Funny, G! Mooned requires specifics of the soul. I wasnt using comedy here, but, you are a master at it! Congratulations, nice to sea you. Thanks Pangie, the Pisces!

Elena Eagle May 31, 2025 at 5:27 PM A well written poem for sure. Very romantic with a beautiful melody.

Kenneth MATTOON May 31, 2025 at 4:19 PM you write beautifully, Panagiota Romios May 31, 2025 at 4:29 PM You are a sweetheart, Kenneth…Hope all is going well for you. Thank you, Pangie