Rewind

Fill me with sand and turn me over 
Create a black hole and let me jump 
Make me Technicolor and press repeat 
Or thin me into tape and select rewind 
Send me back to this previous life 
Let me relive what just happened
Or you can just kiss me again.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Vaso Avatar
November 29, 2014 at 1:37 AM
Beautiful, love the last line!
Allison Avatar
November 26, 2014 at 4:37 PM
I'd go for the kiss faith lol:-) hugs Jan xxx
Carmichael  Avatar
November 26, 2014 at 4:46 PM
That's the option I went for :) Thank you for all the lovely comments Jan! xxx
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