Revolutions

"In all things of nature there is something of the marvelous"  Aristole

                              As
                            I view 
                         the cycles
                      twirl in nature,
                   the beauty is clear.
               Just as the seasons loop
            gracefully from cool to warm;
          the earth roundly traces the sun
       while the milky way pinwheels around.  
    Is the love that finds the grave truly gone?


                   Date: 20 May 2020  
Etheree Poetry contest Sponsored by Dear Heart
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La France Avatar
May 28, 2020 at 10:44 AM
David, wonderfully penned and congratulations on your win in my contest _Constance
Mishra Avatar
May 25, 2020 at 1:56 PM
" seasons loop", "milkyway pinwheels" lovely imagery of the loops of nature. Congratulations on your win David :)
Radhakrishna Avatar
May 25, 2020 at 10:50 AM
Congrats David! Nice one! Milky Way pin wheels around! I like that!
Watt Avatar
May 24, 2020 at 8:44 PM
Beautiful poetry, David. I like your contemplation of the cycles and circles of nature and tying this to death and the afterlife in the last line. Awesome triangle shape as well. Congratulations ~ John
Allison Avatar
May 24, 2020 at 5:09 PM
beautifully penned David, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Roper Avatar
May 24, 2020 at 4:51 PM
Nicely done, David, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
Mcgee Avatar
May 21, 2020 at 7:51 AM
I love the picture you wove of nature...a great choice for the contest.
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