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"In all things of nature there is something of the marvelous" Aristole As I view the cycles twirl in nature, the beauty is clear. Just as the seasons loop gracefully from cool to warm; the earth roundly traces the sun while the milky way pinwheels around. Is the love that finds the grave truly gone? Date: 20 May 2020 Etheree Poetry contest Sponsored by Dear Heart

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Date: 5/28/2020 10:44:00 AM
David, wonderfully penned and congratulations on your win in my contest _Constance
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Date: 5/25/2020 1:56:00 PM
" seasons loop", "milkyway pinwheels" lovely imagery of the loops of nature. Congratulations on your win David :)
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Date: 5/25/2020 10:50:00 AM
Congrats David! Nice one! Milky Way pin wheels around! I like that!
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Date: 5/24/2020 8:44:00 PM
Beautiful poetry, David. I like your contemplation of the cycles and circles of nature and tying this to death and the afterlife in the last line. Awesome triangle shape as well. Congratulations ~ John
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Date: 5/24/2020 5:09:00 PM
beautifully penned David, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/24/2020 4:51:00 PM
Nicely done, David, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 5/21/2020 7:51:00 AM
I love the picture you wove of nature...a great choice for the contest.
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