Revoking Doc's License

Revoking Doc's License #1

A word from the State Medical Board committee
The #1 injection will always be P.D.
Doc, I am considering to slam you out of pity
I do not mess with poets whose licenses come from Hello Kitty.
You overdose my patient RED, getting down to the nitty gritty.

At this time, your practice has been revoke
For coming after me as I wear my black cloak.
I got a grip on my scythe pressed against your throat.
Pees running down your legs leaving you all soak
Doc, I got your body full of Narcotics and Painkillers as a joke.

Dropping you like a lawsuit on the examination table with one smack.
Denying you morphine as your vasectomy goes wrong in this attack
I already drove you insane labeling you a quack.
Your hand I flushed in (TRANQUILIZER), slapping you with a black Jack.
Waking up without your gems blood all over your sack.

Restrain you in a straitjacket, throwing you in a padded room.
Covered in your own s*it as you were in your mother’s womb
Poet-ing like a disco biscuit on ecstasy, before I made you go SKAT-boom! 
Engraving your Poetic Doctor Degree on the outside of your tomb.
With the words that speak, P.D. was the cause of your poetic doom.

by;P.D.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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A  Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 11:24 PM
where is the doc?
Davis Avatar
May 15, 2014 at 9:25 PM
PD This is very deep, powerful, intense, strong and full of scary thoughts and emotion. Thank you for the nice comment on my Mirrors poem. Hugs
Phipps Avatar
October 16, 2010 at 1:43 PM
Wow...intense, very, very good. Exhilarating in fact. Loved it. And, thank you for commenting on my poem about my mother. It is her 68th Birthday today!-We both cried together reading what I wrote for her, it was one of those moments that take your breath away.
A  Avatar
October 2, 2010 at 7:42 PM
AWESOME*LUV~SKAT
Castaneda Avatar
October 2, 2010 at 6:04 PM
Ouch! This hurts :( Love, Audree
D. Avatar
October 2, 2010 at 11:41 AM
still kicking ass my love. xoxoxoxoxox. very excelent slam. very viscous i love it.
Culverhouse Avatar
October 1, 2010 at 5:26 PM
I just wrote a shape poem on smiles and see if it looks like a smile to you?? If you are on the soup! Thanks!
K. Avatar
October 1, 2010 at 10:16 AM
nope it has nothing to do with your laptop-- it's the code you type in for centering the poem-- before the text, just type in < center > then at the end of the write, type in (all together ok, it's not allowing me typing it as it is))) < / center > that should do the trick ;) and crazy how 30 secs nap can refresh me-- eek I need to seriously sleep!! ttyl
Kapoor Avatar
September 30, 2010 at 7:31 PM
Good morning from India my dear Poet. I am sorry but perhaps this is not the thing, which we expect from a great and skilled poet like you. You are such a talented wonderful writer on PS, who can offer great new ideas to human society. Hope you would reconsider writing such stuff, which may be good for few but not suitable for a highly talented poet like you. With love and best wishes always...Ravindra...Poet D.
Hall Mad Poet Avatar
September 30, 2010 at 7:31 PM
Hey girlfriend, as bugs bunny would say, "Whens fightin words." I would challenge you to a friendly slam but i'm scared I might end up with cuts from your words of the screen. Sorry i was thinking out loud. hehe! By the way I did Deborah Guzzi contest. easy. not your turn :-)
Hill Avatar
September 29, 2010 at 9:03 PM
lol, i love your morbid thoughts, please do more :) you know ur ladies rock at poetry, the love stuff and the crazy biatch shit, and this would be the latter my dear, and i loved it as always your admirer and friend :) miss rose
Guzzi Avatar
September 29, 2010 at 5:49 PM
Goodness CHILD NO you can NOt do any of this "stuff" yikers, I don't even like you got exposed to these ideas, I want to come get you and make sure you only have sweet ideas in that pretty head. Write me a sonnet LOL, that's your assignment! ;P
Sweetheart Avatar
September 29, 2010 at 12:17 PM
oh P.D. my BFF .. want to see u at the top in rankings and builders .. I look forward to it every day watching u climb... u are a true and dear friend.. I have a handful... u are a sweet lady with a good heart.. appreciate your blog comment.. I have put my handsome hubby back on now to satisfy the gal populus on soup..haha..
Austin Avatar
September 29, 2010 at 6:28 AM
Yes, you are the doctor's doctor from hell. Know how you feel P.D. I have trouble getting to my bathroom sink because of all the prescription bottles. I wonder how many are really necessary. Keep that fruit in a jar, lest they spoil and rob you of a chance for revue. Love, Dave
Lelitte Avatar
September 29, 2010 at 1:38 AM
Your slam is great...would love to hear it spoken..have a little slam in me too LOL
Smalling Avatar
September 28, 2010 at 6:12 PM
No harm with having fun ... love the grit and bite of it, do not think I could handle it, unless there was a standby emergency kit, ready to revive me from an embarrassing exit. One love, my friend, thankfully you writer sweeter thinks when you read my humble poetry, may you always be friend and never enemy.
Chachere Avatar
September 28, 2010 at 2:43 PM
well, this sounds like one deadly doctor! lol.how embarassing it must be to have urine seeping down your legs.this poem is destined for-- explosion.haha don't even go there with HELLO KITTY "freaks". my cousin gets on my nerves with that ish'! whooo, hope you've been having a nice day. ~Always&Forever Lynette
Falotico Avatar
September 28, 2010 at 11:42 AM
Strong write my dear poet friend... hope something sweet gets slipped under my door...lol Your a unique talented poet, and never never change, luv Michael ps. Remind me to never get on your bad side lol...
Cobb Avatar
September 28, 2010 at 11:33 AM
good one p.d. the doc-tor is officially back in business. this is going to be fun. clean fun of course. i will post my reply in a bit. doc the poet never runs out of things to say.
Murphy Avatar
September 28, 2010 at 10:44 AM
I really enjoy reading your poetry keep it up and thanks for all your ever so kind comments faleshia
K. Avatar
September 28, 2010 at 10:00 AM
well this sure is a fun write, pd--major uh-oh though for the doc--eeep --and that sure is funny getting a license from Hello Kitty-- how about if one gets a license from Hello Mousie? Would that work?? happy to read a new post by you-- nikko :)
Brown Avatar
September 28, 2010 at 9:45 AM
Enjoyed reading your Slam poetry today P.D. Thank you for all your kind comments. Have a wonderful day. Love, Carol
La France Avatar
September 28, 2010 at 7:25 AM
well its raw and quite vivid, but slam is your style and no one does it better~~
Hall Mad Poet Avatar
September 28, 2010 at 6:59 AM
Sorry here's a 1 can you put it inplace of the "!"
Hall Mad Poet Avatar
September 28, 2010 at 6:58 AM
P.D. you are the masteress at poetry and believe me there is no such word as masteress so I made it up for you. Thankyou for the !st place in your competition. hopefully one day i'll be as good as you
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