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Revival In the Woods

Branches serve as pews,
Tabernacle made of trees;
Praising feathered choir.

Copyright © Raul Moreno | Year Posted 2009

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September 1, 2009 at 9:08 AM

no better place to worship than in nature ......very nice!

August 4, 2009 at 4:15 PM

Wonderful write, Raul .... very clever !! I often feel as though I am in a cathedral when I stand in the center of a circle of very tall trees ... I really like the title here !!

August 2, 2009 at 8:32 PM

nice I have always loved the woodland chapel!!! So........where's your limerick Haiku man? Light & Love

August 2, 2009 at 5:02 PM

Wow! What an uplifting and creative view. Blessings to you for sharing it with us. Karen

August 2, 2009 at 12:49 PM

Great image =) fresh one, I needed something like that jojojo thanks for the experience =D

Barbara Gorelick

August 2, 2009 at 11:13 AM

Raul, you have outdone yourself..this is just beautiful..Haiku is my favorite form and this goes to my favs. BG

August 2, 2009 at 4:26 AM

Tremendous Haiku Raul, it still fascinates me how so few words can say so much>>James

August 2, 2009 at 3:40 AM

An inspired reading from the Book of Raul ; Haiku chapter 5.7.5 ......

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