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Revival In the Woods

Branches serve as pews, Tabernacle made of trees; Praising feathered choir.

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Abe Lopez

Date: 9/1/2009 9:08:00 AM

no better place to worship than in nature ......very nice!

Sue Mason

Date: 8/4/2009 4:15:00 PM

Wonderful write, Raul .... very clever !! I often feel as though I am in a cathedral when I stand in the center of a circle of very tall trees ... I really like the title here !!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 8/2/2009 8:32:00 PM

nice I have always loved the woodland chapel!!! So........where's your limerick Haiku man? Light & Love

Date: 8/2/2009 5:02:00 PM

Wow! What an uplifting and creative view. Blessings to you for sharing it with us. Karen

Cesar Cantu

Date: 8/2/2009 12:49:00 PM

Great image =) fresh one, I needed something like that jojojo thanks for the experience =D

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 8/2/2009 11:13:00 AM

Raul, you have outdone yourself..this is just beautiful..Haiku is my favorite form and this goes to my favs. BG

James Fraser

Date: 8/2/2009 4:26:00 AM

Tremendous Haiku Raul, it still fascinates me how so few words can say so much>>James

Sean Kelly

Date: 8/2/2009 3:40:00 AM

An inspired reading from the Book of Raul ; Haiku chapter 5.7.5 ......