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Revival Back Then

Nine years old 
way back 
seventy-two years ago
my family went 
to church's revival

The speaker was
a chalk artist
he told the story
of Lazarus
and the rich man

I realized I was 
lost,
undone,
without God
or His Son

God reached 
down His
hand for me

I did not know
exactly what 
I had done
I did not really 
understand
but the Holy Spirit
came in
I have wanted to 
live for Him
and He has taken
care of me
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George Avatar
June 29, 2026 at 7:52 PM
Holy spirit comes into our lives like fire. He ignites our faith and gives us wisdom. May God let you live guided by the Holy Spirit.
Kendrick Avatar
June 30, 2026 at 4:04 AM
Valsa, I cannot say I have been perfect or sin free, but the Holy Spirit has helped me, protected me, and comforted me in so many ways even though I am human. Thank you so much for the uplifting review of my work. Sara K.
Maverick Avatar
May 29, 2026 at 3:44 PM
Amen Sara..Tell it like you know.' God Bless.)
Kendrick Avatar
May 29, 2026 at 4:58 PM
Why, thank you, Joe. Thanks for asking God to bless me because I need it every hour. I appreciate the visit. Sara K.
Rolland Avatar
May 27, 2026 at 4:51 PM
very interesting poetry, faith can be a clue for many, thanks poet
Kendrick Avatar
May 27, 2026 at 4:55 PM
Yann, I would hope that all could come to see what faith has to offer, but not many do. Thank you for your visit and uplifting comments. Sara K.
Goldsmith Avatar
May 27, 2026 at 3:36 PM
WOW!!! I enjoyed reading your lovely/wonderful~ read/write. What a great picture you have here. You have been blessed... Have a blessed/great day writing away...........
Kendrick Avatar
May 27, 2026 at 4:54 PM
I appreciate the visit and nice review of my work. It was a nice day, but I did not do very much writing. Sara K.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 27, 2026 at 8:13 AM
The Holy Spirit drew you in and you were receptive to God’s call, as you remain. Hugs and blessings!
Kendrick Avatar
May 27, 2026 at 8:41 AM
I knew you would understand, Kim. God works His wonders through the Holy Spirit. Sara K.
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