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February 4, 2025, placed 8th in Brian Strand's Choose A February 2025 Posted Poem

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When he ceased to pray, he floundered and lost his way in a world gone gray. Then he turned his back on church. Of friends, he lost track, and gray turned to black. He cried in the night, "I'm to blame for my dark plight. Can wrong be made right?" God's Spirit so bold revived this Christian gone cold; soon life shone like gold. His faith is now strong. God helped him to right each wrong and gave back his song.

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Date: 2/1/2025 7:33:00 PM
I enjoyed this beautifully told story of faith lost, and found again, Janice. A touching tale.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/3/2025 7:57:00 AM
Thanks SO much, Evelyn. Janice
Date: 2/1/2025 9:59:00 AM
Dear Janice, your poem is so wonderful. That is as it should be, from down to high, and staying there. Excellent spiritual conclusion.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/3/2025 7:57:00 AM
Thanks SO much, Victor. Janice
Date: 2/1/2025 9:06:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your powerful faith write. Have a blessed day as you write away..................
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/3/2025 7:58:00 AM
Thanks So much, Paula. Janice
Date: 2/1/2025 9:01:00 AM
That's lovely Janice. Faith can be so helpful when things feel bleak.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/3/2025 7:58:00 AM
Thanks SO much, Dilly Dally. Janice

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