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care enough to let go just for a while like a moth to a flame, he will return 26/05/2011... 13:35

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Jack Horne

Date: 5/29/2011 3:01:00 AM

Lovely words of wisdom, Wilma. Loved the form too - I've never tried a tetractys before and must have a go!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/28/2011 3:06:00 PM

we all need space to levae while and return with renewed glow, wilms... totally amazing! :) huggs, nette

James Peranteau

Date: 5/27/2011 3:48:00 PM

Touching write dear poet ! Glad I peeked in....hmmmmmuch love *smiles* james

James Foulk

Date: 5/27/2011 1:39:00 PM

so beautiful, so tender, like a moth to a flame, he will return, love that line, love this poem.

James Fraser

Date: 5/27/2011 12:13:00 PM

The lure of he to the flame of she. Unification they'll be, like the moth so free. Their wings will flutter like hearts in flight, like a moth to the flame, enjoying ones delight. Have a terrific weekend Wilma....:) xx

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/26/2011 9:06:00 PM

great advice..wise words.. lovely expression Wilma.. and truth be told as well luv..

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 5/26/2011 3:26:00 PM

I really like this form, just wrote one yesterday. Now as for your words tell a tale very familiar to me and most people I know. You have touching words but I do agree with p.d. 2 hours tops lol. Now how are doing my busy missing partner in crime? I take it work has been crazy for you too. I would love to have a week that I can just sit down and write. Me rambling go to sleep luv. Love from across the sea. Michael

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/26/2011 2:21:00 PM

That's not fair... gosh guys are dodos' in ever sense... mine only has 2 hours ... to return.. one month .. well he can stay where it burns... great writing Wilma,..p.d.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/26/2011 2:13:00 PM

VEry nice, Wilma. Great theme and execution!!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/26/2011 11:24:00 AM

If we really love someone, we have to give them their freedom. When love is true, they do return, Wilma. Profound tectractyl! Tomorrow night I leave for a fishing vacation and will be away for a week. Have a great time while I'm away. Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/26/2011 10:52:00 AM

I am sitting here reading some very amazing poems today Wilma. I am glad yours was among them. Have a wonderful day full of love and joy. Love, Carol

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 5/26/2011 8:10:00 AM

I just bet that he (whoever HE is wink, wink I am pretending I know who HE is, wink wink) will be coming back to have his wings singed-- ouchy, all for the sake of missy flame, well worth it I think ;) reminds me of that story (legend?) of why moths are drawn by flames (err rather bright light) will tell it to you one time? oh gosh a bedtime story this in lieu of a lullaby?? haha! hugsmoi haha

Kabuteng P.Ink K.
Date: 5/26/2011 8:10:00 AM

drawn by? gosh even my grammar is whacked today? goodness! I meant "drawn to" eeekkk

Skat A

Date: 5/26/2011 6:15:00 AM

Your so right" how does that one PHRASE go~~ if you love something set it free! if it comes back it is yours. If not go look for it and bring it back <----- lol 2 the last part. Smiles~luv*SKAT

Cory Long

Date: 5/26/2011 5:27:00 AM

I have enjoyed your write today.. cory

Kash Poet

Date: 5/26/2011 4:46:00 AM

Certainly he will return to her for she is a flame.Enjoyed.....

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/26/2011 4:39:00 AM

Liked the last line like a moth to a flame he will return. Wilma