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Reverse Graffiti

     The Light, through the veil, paints secrets. 
The crossroads of constellations twisting into new patterns. 
In reverence, the Moon dances, coaxing the Sun, your loyal companion. 
     Your lies bloom, Enchantress... watch!

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Terry Miller Date: 5/7/2024 3:19:00 AM Oh yes! This is an excellent erasure of words to leave this wonderful poem, congratulations. Login to Reply Crystol Woods Date: 5/8/2024 5:16:00 AM Tysm!

Charlotte Puddifoot Date: 5/5/2024 2:26:00 PM i enjoyed reading your poem, an interesting formation of words from the text - congrats on your win in the contest! Login to Reply Crystol Woods Date: 5/8/2024 5:16:00 AM Thank you!

Suzanne Delaney Date: 5/5/2024 9:43:00 AM I love your version Crystol, and clever how you changed ‘ lies’ from a verb to a noun. Congratulations, SuZ Login to Reply Crystol Woods Date: 5/8/2024 5:16:00 AM Oh good I'm glad I didn't make an error! Thank you so much for an enjoyable and challenging contest! Suzette Richards Date: 5/5/2024 8:39:00 PM I did notice it and it was well within the rules of the contest. In fact, there are a number of homophones in the text provided. I liked the way that you have used capital letters to highlight the personifications . :) Crystol Woods Date: 5/5/2024 11:14:00 AM Oop... that little mistake might disqualify me actually. The rules stated not to change tenses... not sure if that counts. But ty for your comment!

Mike Bayles Date: 5/2/2024 7:09:00 PM Very nice, Crystol. Login to Reply Crystol Woods Date: 5/3/2024 6:19:00 AM Tysm Mike!

Daniel Henry Rodgers Date: 5/1/2024 6:57:00 AM Dear Crystol, your entry for the Reverse Graffiti contest is a mesmerizing blend of mystique and artistry. I felt the imagery of light painting secrets through veils and constellations twisting into new patterns evokes a sense of wonder and intrigue. Your poetic expression captures the essence of transformation and the allure of hidden truths. A very captivating piece of creativity. - Blessings, Daniel Login to Reply Crystol Woods Date: 5/1/2024 9:36:00 AM Yay! I was a bit nervous that I didn't understand the assignment or I'd bitten off more than I could chew lol... you've encouraged and uplifted me! To me, entering contests is about the challenge and growth, not winning or losing... and it's a lot of fun! Thank you for your comments and time Daniel.