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Reverse Graffiti


The light obeys. Bending, it paints secrets; in reverence, the moon blooms.

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Suzette Richards

April 18, 2024 at 9:41 PM

:) , just a pity about the "s" in your last word. It is not verbatim.

Andrea Dietrich

April 19, 2024 at 10:36 AM

wow, I thought it was!

Kim Rodrigues

April 17, 2024 at 10:42 AM

Very nice, Andra!

Karen Jones

April 15, 2024 at 2:47 PM

Very creative love the imagery!

Ravindra K Kapoor

April 14, 2024 at 9:05 PM

The light obeys- Bending What a beauty you have painted in this one line poem with a wonderful ending "the Moon blooms". You have woven it brilliantly dear friend Andrea. Great lines...... . My good wishes for your entry. Love and best wishes always...Ravindra

Joseph May

April 14, 2024 at 2:26 PM

Very nicely done, best wishes in the contest

Ann Peck

April 14, 2024 at 7:53 AM

I love it, Andrea! It's perfect!

Andrea Dietrich

April 14, 2024 at 9:00 AM

Thanks. I hope it will do.

Ink Empress

April 14, 2024 at 7:08 AM

I always found erasures interesting to do and yours is flawless and brilliant! Well woven and delivered sweet andrea! You did very well i think. As you might know by now i also love “ the moon blooms” gorgeous! How light bends and paint secrets! Brilliant! Pleasure reading this. Best wishes dear andrea

Andrea Dietrich

April 14, 2024 at 9:00 AM

Thanks, Ink. Do you think you might try this one?

Silent One

April 14, 2024 at 6:56 AM

I have no idea what this contest is about.. but well done, I think.. nice arrangement of words... best of luck..

Andrea Dietrich

April 14, 2024 at 8:31 AM

carefully read her instructions and two examples, and use the text she provides. Then it should be clear to you. You can do it one way or another . I chose the straight line way